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8/17/22, 5:04 PM
AHHH! I hate it when I read about a fun mmorpg that does not exist! So, well done on your part! Overall, I really like how fleshed out all the characters are. I actually started grinning as it dawned on Finn who he was getting tips from. And of course, quite the hot scene we (almost) got there, looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@xentiornes I promise it's going to be an awesome MMO...!
8/17/22, 2:44 PM
Omg the slow burn that I didn’t know I needed. The wait was definitely worth it. love it!

8/17/22, 3:07 PM
@Curious53 That's awesome! Also thank you for reminding me that I meant to tag it slow burn. 😅
Anonymous
8/17/22, 12:47 PM
This is both hot and delightful! I hope this more character-rich addition means you've found some inspiration; it has always left me itching for more. Now that you've tossed so many interesting plates in the air I can't wait to see where you take it. Very hot, very charming. Love the parallel of Jack thinking Finn outclasses his avatar, and Finn thinking Jack is the bigger stud in-game. Rada's "intimidating roommate" act is also interestingly subtle. Give all these nerds get a happy ending!

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you found all of those things interesting!
Iriefal
8/17/22, 11:39 AM
Woow, just woow Love it, pls never give up on this story. I like how Rama is slightly jealous and how the story progress. Normally I prefer dominant smaller guys, as I myself am switch, but damn, description from jack side was very well written as from the other side was magic enhanced, so not really counted in. It is just my suggestion but please don't make it love triangle where Rama and Finn fight with each other, make it threesome manage and make everyone in the story happy🙏🥰

8/17/22, 1:33 PM
@Iriefal Thanks for reading this huge story segment. I really thought about splitting it in half to make it more manageable. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. 😌
8/15/22, 1:57 PM
Could it be that Obmih is possibly not a very good influence on Himbo? 🤔 No, it is everyone else who is wrong. 😌

8/15/22, 3:21 PM
@A Possession A Day I think they bring out the best in each other :grin:
8/15/22, 2:07 PM
😫🍩🍆

8/15/22, 2:23 PM
@RedShifter I *also* don’t like eggplant donuts! ;)
8/14/22, 7:10 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter! And the next! And the next! And the... :grin:
Bootiegoonz
8/13/22, 8:46 AM
This chapter was my favorite! You gave what I had been craving specifically in the taunting of Luke by the janitor! Also, I loved the dialog in the comments section! Looks of thought provoking topics! As a black American, I came even harder to this chapter out of all! I do wish the janitor was sexier to Luke at least.but I saw the psychological angle you were going for.
Anonymous
8/11/22, 2:57 PM
really enjoying feeling Tanners enjoyment playing with Peter… another great chapter!!!
8/11/22, 2:00 PM
They both hugged in the end! This episode was so wonderfully silly! I laughed really hard at this: “Who’s there?!” Called the ghost, sounding just like Cliff the motel owner. “Have some juice!” Himbo said, hurling the wet brick into the dark room with all his might. The whole chapter was simply fantastic, and kinky! A wonderful addition to the series, and the boys had a great time together. Also, all the "dude"s were fantastic.

8/11/22, 2:03 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it! It had me wheezing :joy: