Recent Comments

8/17/22, 3:17 PM
I didn’t think you could top the original chapter of this story but this one at least equals it for completely different reasons. Getting to know these characters has its own levels of delight. Thank you.

8/17/22, 5:13 PM
@John Manning it's very intimidating to follow up a surprise hit, but it's a great challenge to try and keep the quality level up where it needs to be.
8/17/22, 3:16 PM
I really love how sweet and fleshed out the characters are in this...they feel like proper humans. I'm loving it.

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@Reynard high praise! Thanks!
8/17/22, 5:04 PM
AHHH! I hate it when I read about a fun mmorpg that does not exist! So, well done on your part! Overall, I really like how fleshed out all the characters are. I actually started grinning as it dawned on Finn who he was getting tips from. And of course, quite the hot scene we (almost) got there, looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@xentiornes I promise it's going to be an awesome MMO...!
8/17/22, 2:44 PM
Omg the slow burn that I didn’t know I needed. The wait was definitely worth it. love it!

8/17/22, 3:07 PM
@Curious53 That's awesome! Also thank you for reminding me that I meant to tag it slow burn. 😅
Anonymous
8/17/22, 12:47 PM
This is both hot and delightful! I hope this more character-rich addition means you've found some inspiration; it has always left me itching for more. Now that you've tossed so many interesting plates in the air I can't wait to see where you take it. Very hot, very charming. Love the parallel of Jack thinking Finn outclasses his avatar, and Finn thinking Jack is the bigger stud in-game. Rada's "intimidating roommate" act is also interestingly subtle. Give all these nerds get a happy ending!

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you found all of those things interesting!
Iriefal
8/17/22, 11:39 AM
Woow, just woow Love it, pls never give up on this story. I like how Rama is slightly jealous and how the story progress. Normally I prefer dominant smaller guys, as I myself am switch, but damn, description from jack side was very well written as from the other side was magic enhanced, so not really counted in. It is just my suggestion but please don't make it love triangle where Rama and Finn fight with each other, make it threesome manage and make everyone in the story happy🙏🥰

8/17/22, 1:33 PM
@Iriefal Thanks for reading this huge story segment. I really thought about splitting it in half to make it more manageable. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. 😌
8/15/22, 1:57 PM
Could it be that Obmih is possibly not a very good influence on Himbo? 🤔 No, it is everyone else who is wrong. 😌

8/15/22, 3:21 PM
@A Possession A Day I think they bring out the best in each other :grin:
8/15/22, 2:07 PM
😫🍩🍆

8/15/22, 2:23 PM
@RedShifter I *also* don’t like eggplant donuts! ;)
8/14/22, 7:10 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter! And the next! And the next! And the... :grin:
Bootiegoonz
8/13/22, 8:46 AM
This chapter was my favorite! You gave what I had been craving specifically in the taunting of Luke by the janitor! Also, I loved the dialog in the comments section! Looks of thought provoking topics! As a black American, I came even harder to this chapter out of all! I do wish the janitor was sexier to Luke at least.but I saw the psychological angle you were going for.