Recent Comments

forced
5/16/25, 7:21 AM
I really want to give this story a chance but the writing. ... its painfully distracting. It feels more like a rough draft that a high schooler sent in over text message. Does it get better after this?

5/16/25, 2:22 PM
@forced Hi forced! I must apologize 4 the overuse of CAPS....I was just getting started and I used caps for emphasis (or force by the villian(s))-- I will let you know that others shared your feelings, and I did my best to improve on this....it does reduce (after a couple of chapters)-- I hope you continue with the story! Thanks 4 the support/interest!
5/16/25, 10:09 AM
One of the best series this year by far! Keep it up. So stoked for more chapters.
5/16/25, 12:58 PM
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!... Thank YOU.
Anonymous
5/16/25, 1:58 PM
This story is the perfect slow-burner!!!! Im addicted!!!!

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous glad u like it
Anonymous
5/16/25, 3:28 PM
Like how it took longer to convince Liam to taste his own pre than Noah's. The further they get the more resistant Liam seems. Maybe Noah shouldn't let him cum so fast to motivate him more.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous yea, and noted, liam eventually is gonna be beggining to cum, you'll see!
Anonymous
5/16/25, 3:40 PM
Great story so far.. a slow burn that actually goes somewhere. Great balance of angst and payoff. Great pacing. Do your thing bro

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous dudee thanks so much for that, will do
5/16/25, 4:16 PM
I love it.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 5:49 PM
@Jonanator 🥵
5/16/25, 4:38 PM
Just fantastic, love the introduction of some more feet/musk action. May Noah’s domination grow over Liam at this brilliant slow pace!

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 5:47 PM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) you're honestly about to ride a fucked up little roller coaster, dude! cheers
5/16/25, 5:12 PM
So fucking hot dude. The smell and taste of your buds cock can be highly addictive. It can make you have wet dreams about burying your nose into his nuts breathing his musk in deep and licking up all his sweet precum. Liam is already hooked and doesn’t know it. He’s going to be such a good cocksucker for Noah.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 5:49 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) yeahh, you can feel liams braind getting rewired right? and theres so much more smell action coming next, you have no ideaa lmao
Sub jock
5/16/25, 7:24 PM
Oh shit! Noah has been sexting Camilla! Don't think I didn't catch that ;) Hot story. I wanted Noah's cumshot to get in Liam's mouth but I imagine thats to come (cum). I was a bit disappointed Noah didn't call out how their sizes compared while they were stroking. Or Liam consciously thinking how much thicker and longer Noah was while he stroked both dicks. All and all, i like where this is going.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 8:01 PM
@Sub jock ure on the right track… liam will definitely be thinking and doing all that (and more). just wait—some of those comparisons are going to hit hard when they finally land. glad you’re enjoying it dude, trust me, it only gets messier from here