Recent Comments

10/31/22, 4:09 AM
This is so wholesome and so unbelievably hot.
10/31/22, 2:46 AM
Loved the worldbuilding in this one! It's interesting reading from the perspective of someone who doesn't know whether the pack is a cult or not. That sort of thing is always hard to tell. Great job writing a poignant story about the things we should or shouldn't do for love.
Anonymous
10/30/22, 10:58 PM
Fuck this was hot. Hope part 2 comes soon!
BL Guy
10/28/22, 6:55 PM
This is soo good... You should definately add this to the cupid stories section too

10/30/22, 6:46 PM
@BL Guy Thanks! 😁 And I probably will
10/30/22, 3:48 PM
Love the series but would like more sex.
10/30/22, 7:09 AM
I loved the writing first and foremost, how you can conjure up emotions and sexiness with your words. But I also loved how you played on the Halloween themes by conjuring up a world of communion between the here and there that is loving and joyful. Many thanks for sharing this with us. Wonderful.

10/30/22, 2:11 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) What a lovely comment! Thanks! I admit I was a little worried about how this story would be received, since it's less overtly horny compared to what I usually write here.
10/29/22, 2:04 PM
Liked the worldbuilding. Hope that even if you don't do a direct sequel you'll make another story in the setting. Also that boy really is gonna go from being sexton to having a ton of sex with whatever that angel did to him, huh?

10/30/22, 2:10 PM
@[Silvoid](/user/show/1138564) Thanks! I probably won't ever do a direct sequel, but you might see some more angel beasties and pro-sex religions in future stuff.
10/29/22, 10:16 AM
The way you’ve crafted the story so far has been brilliant. The tone shifts between characters are consistent, there’s an obvious tension and release cycle with the dialogue… not only is it an incredibly hot pleasure to read your work, it’s very mentally stimulating. Keep up the good work, bro. This ties with Kinks in Space as my favorites of your work so far.
10/28/22, 8:16 AM
While I personally hoped this would have gone the traditional-babysitter-fucks-the-boy way, I have to say I am so glad I was wrong. An amazing twist, really well-written, and you nailed the unrealistic aspects without making too much of a parody out of it. The only complaint I have is the format, bold for all of Ken's lines made it a bit harder for me to read, but this might be just a personal issue. Otherwise, fantastic job!

Sebastián Apollo
10/28/22, 5:56 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you for the kind words! I know overuse of the italics/bold is a bad habit of mine, so I definitely toned them down for my next project. Hopefully it's easier to read!
10/28/22, 12:33 PM
I did *not* see that coming! Amazing work man! I'm so hyped for this you have no idea!