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11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…
11/2/22, 11:45 AM
Simultaneously sublime and ridiculous.
Zai
11/2/22, 10:26 AM
Holy Butt Fuck'in & Cock Suck'in, Dude! This is one H🔥T and 'Sin'tillating tale of debauchery and hidden lust revealed! The way you've written Superman's dive into the world of wicked passions since chapter one for me reveals his truest, innermost self concerning his sexuality. Superman, aka Clark Kent is a natural born cock craving, cum guzzling bottom boi. Lex has brought out the Superhero stud's need to be dominated; both with words and actions. The once clean cut Kryptonian hero is now a dirty, turned out slut whore submissive, a true BITCH! Superman, aka SuppaFag, aka SuperQueer, aka Supercocksuker, etc, etc, etc, is now and will always be Lex Luthor's prime, grade A turned out Slave! I cannot wait for more of this orgasmic AU! Are you planning on bringing Batman into the story? I'd love read about Lex capturing the Caped Crusader as the superhero is snooping about. Then, oh then, the bald, supervillainous stud makes Batman his next hero to Be Bitched! I sooooooo imagine Batman in his classic physique hugging body suit with those Skin Tight briefs! And Lex eventually fucks Batman's mouth and ass with wild abandon. Unlike stripping the Superman out of his costume, Lex slits Batman's Speedo-like briefs right over his hole and then plows the sexy hunk hero into Neverland. Forever! As the hot villain bitch's Batman, he uses Batman's penchant for calling items Bat-? Like Bat-mobile or Bat-arang, etc. But as he's conquering another hero ass, Lex uses terms such as Bat-pussy/Bat-cunt, etc, further cementing his new, dominating hold on the Caped Crusader. Plus, Lex will then be able to gain access and control of Bruce Wayne's companies, holdings and monies. Thanks for sharing, Dude! You Rock!
11/2/22, 8:35 AM
It was an interesting concept, without a doubt and well-written as always, but the sexy part of it felt like an afterthought and rushed, as if making sure you fulfilled a checklist. Honestly would have been better had it not been specifically featured, but implied.
11/2/22, 4:52 AM
Kinda wish he kept the double peen but o well. Good story, fun read.
11/2/22, 2:55 AM
THANK YOU, Darby!! Appreciate your comments & encouragement!! I am humbled to deliver a storyline that you & the other readers/group members can/will ENJOY!! Believe me, I've got MORE in store for SUPERMAN!!:wink:
Chriscam
11/1/22, 11:35 PM
Congrats and THANKS!! For your work. I'm a big fan. Just hope see the chapter 4 in the Halloween party today or so... ;)
11/1/22, 9:07 PM
Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your positive comments & encouragement-- I've been a HUGE Superman fan since I was a kid, but when seeing some of the original films & he was "matched up against a villain", I've always wanted some of the movies/storylines to "push the envelope", i.e., withh him being feeling more dominated & humiliated --so I hope I'm satisfying you/the other readers with this series!! :innocent: