Recent Comments

11/6/22, 7:52 AM
Clever and inventive as always, what i liked most is that slight hint of danger. What happened to the previous pack? Did they choose to leave or did something happen? Just how old is Alpha? A mystery with no answers. I also loved the idea of taking bits of different people, it's a literal display of what happens in every group, each new member changes the dynamic.

11/6/22, 4:08 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) There are answers to these questions, but they will have to be addressed in a sequel at one point. And I'm glad you liked it. :)
11/6/22, 3:36 PM
Another super hot chapter. Something about your writing style never fails to make me jerk off like Coach Cameron just did.
11/6/22, 1:15 PM
How do you manage to keep outdoing yourself. Amazing story.

11/6/22, 2:27 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Good Morning MJKUHL!!! THANK YOU 4 the kind compliment, Sir-- you've made my day!! Not quite sure how to answer your question/comment (which I take as the HIGHEST of compliments!)-- it's not a matter of "outdoing myself", really-- I do my BEST to ensure that the story continues to unfold with new/exciting elements.... but I appreciate your continued enjoyment of the storyline & I hope to keep you/the other readers engaged & satiated!! MUCH Gratitude & ENJOY Your Sunday!!!:innocent:
nycboot
11/6/22, 12:13 AM
Oh wow. A nice Hollywood-type ending, most appropriate for this saga. Bravo for a wonderfully hot and romantic story!!
11/5/22, 1:39 PM
Hey Darby!! Thanks so much for the positive comments (& suggestion)!! Happy to hear that you're continuing to enjoy the storyline!! ENJOY your weekend!:innocent:

Marcus
11/5/22, 6:34 PM
It’s so hot ! @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)

11/5/22, 9:22 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/10024751) Thanks, Marcus!! Glad you are enjoying it!! ENJOY your weekend!! :innocent:
11/5/22, 12:22 PM
Another great chapter., would love to see Superman forced to perform his homosexual song and dance for the people of metropolis and have them turn on their defeated, degraded, saviour. Would really had to the humiliation of the cock crazy faggot supaslut boi. But I trust whatever else you have in store would be amazing.
11/4/22, 6:53 PM
Ciao ZAI!! Your praise & positive comments continue to humble me...:innocent: I will keep your clothing fetish in mind when outlining the upcoming chapters-- I think I have a HOT SURPRISE coming that you'll REALLY ENJOY (Chapter 11)!! In the meantime, hopefully Chapter 8 will go up sometime today & I'm happy to hear that keep surprising you (and of course, ROCK HARD)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Wishing U a FUN, relaxing weekend!:smiling_imp:
11/4/22, 2:05 PM
Ciao ZAI!! Thank YOU 4 your excitement about the upcoming chapters-- I hope to please you & the other readers with the direction(s) of the story!! P.S. With respect to your question-- Chapter 8 is uploaded already & its currently being reviewed for approval, which I hope will happen soon, so that you & others are able to satiate your/their "kink appetitites" for the upcoming weekend!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: This is honestly "my first go" at writing gay erotica/kink, although I've been a HUGE fan of other writers work on this site/other sources, e.g., Jack Parker, Cicero, Hector Oppenheimer, Oliverclaudiusdarcy and others, so I encourage you to follow your inspiration and "put pen to paper" (as the saying goes)!! Ciao Bello & ENJOY the weekend!!:innocent:
11/4/22, 5:33 AM
Hey ZAI!! Thanks again for your continued inspiring comments!! They fuel/energize me to be MORE creative, brainstorm new twists & turns for Superman, which allows me to really get "my kink on"-- BTW...I'm awaiting approval for PART 8 to launch, but I already have Parts 9 & 10 uploaded!! Hope you will ENJOY them thoroughly over the weekend!!:wink:

Zai
11/4/22, 8:48 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Oh Wow! 3 new up-cumming h🔥t new chapters. Yahoo! Just a quick query - why do you need approval to upload chapter 8? Is that just standard for gayspiralstories? Eventually, I'd like to write some gay fiction/fanfiction and publish it on this site. Thanks for the informing me about the treat I and my fellow readers get to enjoy soon! Ciao, Dude! 😀😁😛😜
11/3/22, 1:10 PM
Ciao ZAI!! LMAO....you sure know how to INSPIRE me!!! I assure you...your vivid curiosities will hopefully be satiated soon enough!!! DEF Feeling your exciting kink ENERGY through your positive words, praise & suggestions-- it fuels me to only sharpen my creative mind to execute a better story 4U & the other readers!! THANK YOU from the depths of my kinky mind-- U have yourself an AWESOME day!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/4/22, 5:13 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Yo! Dude! Thanks for your positivity! It's very refreshing and adds more smiles to my day! Yes, I do love me some studs in various articles of clothing. Especially really tight and finely tailored items. Skintight Speedos & jocks. Suits. Chinos & jeans. Wrestling, baseball, football, etc uniforms. Cop, military, etc uniforms... Especially motorcycle cops 👅. Etc, etc, etc. I'm excited to read how you develop this fine, kinky story. You have definitely surprised me more than once and yes, you via this erotic adventure have left me... ummmm... errrr... well, rock hard from hot dreams... ... ... lol... 🛏😴😲 Adios, Dude!