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12/13/22, 3:41 PM
I really like this. You manage to keep both characters cute and loving throughout. I did like how Noah got carried away on the weekend that Danny was fully tranced on. Feels like good set up for tension in another chapter.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:48 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I'm glad that you like it. I was afraid that I took it a bit too far, many people don't appreciate this total deletion of a person's personality. But it's something that really triggers me - at least as long as there's a way back, too. I'm already working on the second chapter. Noah is going to struggle even harder with his own desires and the situation Danny is forcing on him...
12/13/22, 3:34 PM
Hot story! I’m excited to see what happens next. And excited to read another 9 parts.

12/13/22, 6:19 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) And they are cumming.
12/13/22, 3:02 PM
Nice story. I liked it.
12/12/22, 11:49 PM
But why is this in Spiral Stories?

12/13/22, 9:39 AM
@[Theodore](/user/show/289051) It isn't, it's just in Cupid. The new update for the website has made it so all stories show up on the four websites, if you want to curate what's available for you, check Martin's announcement.
12/13/22, 6:41 AM
Ooh, honey, the sexual tension between Bellamy and Papi leading up to that moment they kiss in bed? Feels right out of a fucked-up fairy tale. So damn natural. You’re doing well at building up stakes, too; despite the madness of the situation, I also feel that Papi’s career (I swear I keep forgetting his name, damn Bellamy) is at risk and I’m genuinely worried. (Note that I’m writing this only halfway through the chapter…) One minor tidbit, right when night changed to day, it might have slightly benefited the transition to insert a breaking line, which I think you can get by writing five dashes next to each other or something. Perhaps again before the “library” paragraph, though that one’s up to your discretion since you might have just done one already. I’m worried about what Thad might know or do, having seen Alex and Bellamy in the study room. I appreciate that, despite the riotous and—dare I say it?—_unrealistic_ (gods forbid) homoeroticism of KOK and this college in general, you’ve simultaneously maintained a sense of reality to the story that convinces me that just saying “I’m fucking your son” wouldn’t really solve the problem; indeed, it _would_ be career ending. Alright, so let’s see what’s next… ~~and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans…~~

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 7:26 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) This chapter came very naturally to me. I actually wrote about half of it, everything from the beginning to about halfway through the library, in a single sitting. You know when the ideas are just flowing through your head like a movie, and your just typing and describing the flow as it enters your head? The entire Bellamy/Alex conversation in bed was something really important for me to try and nail properly, so I hope I did it justice! Thank you for the suggestion, I suppose the timeskips could've been a bit clearer. I don't want to spoil anything for now. But let's just say..._I don't think we've seen the last of Thad or his wild fraternity friends anytime soon_... > and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans… _Please do._ 😉 As always, Soren, I appreciate your comments!
12/11/22, 7:58 AM
This is a great start. You did a crazy amount of world building in a short amount of time with the frat house. The bratty-ness of Bellamy is hilarious, teasing and sexy. It was also really cute to see Alexander try and keep his cool through everything going on. Can't wait to read more!

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 2:34 AM
@[JaysonGayman](/user/show/10026898) So sorry for the late response, as I've barely saw this now. Thank you so much for the kind words! Alex/Bellamy are quite the pair and I had a lot of fun writing their interactions off eachother. And, _you didn't hear it from me_, but I don't think we've seen the last of those crazy frat boys yet! 😉
Waouh histoire incroyable
12/13/22, 12:33 AM
Pas au l'histoire elle est incroyable j'aurais vraiment aimé être à sa place
Anonymous
12/12/22, 10:50 PM
Franchement j'ai adoré cette histoire pour un début c'est vachement bien
12/4/22, 3:09 PM
Oh man, I feel so bad for Luke losing the game like that and further alienating himself from the team. And what about the implications of his tryst with Mark for his relationship with Sammy? So much to be concerned about! I really hope you write them a happy ending! The sex is superb, of course.

12/4/22, 3:21 PM
Also, the more I think about it, the angrier I get with Luke’s mom. She clearly got the diagnosis that he’s on the spectrum, and then chose to ignore whatever advice she got from his doctors on how to handle it, allowing him to grow up with the fiction that he’s just like anyone else and doesn’t need any kind of individualized support. Imagine how much of the confusion he’s experiencing could be mitigated if she just did him the service of telling him the truth. Man, you’re making me feel things. Well done, @[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) .

12/12/22, 12:14 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, my mother was the same. I’m also on the spectrum and she didn’t tell me until I was 18 in my senior year of school. Even I managed to realize that I might be autistic years before she told me since I exhibited many behaviors that correlates to that(I.e. hate being touched, getting annoyed from how she talked on the phone when I was in my own room and she was in hers, spinning in circles to calm me down, trouble articulating my thoughts and feelings, getting offended from jokes because I couldn’t pick up on the sarcasm and having people think I’m sarcastic when I was serious at times cause I couldn’t hear my own cues). And I know she knew since she did listen enough to have me go to therapy since the first grade all the way to 12th. Luke’s mom might have been like my mother and just left it all to the counselors(assuming that Luke has a counselor at all). But yeah, I feel anger is warranted when it comes to their actions(or lack they took) just like you said.

12/12/22, 5:16 PM
@[Omar](/user/show/10014681) Very thought provoking stuff! Personally while I think Maria may have made a mistake, she did what she thought was best for Luke. As a single mom who struggles financially, she was also limited in what she could do. But most importantly she didn’t want to socially isolate Luke from his peers. After he began socializing with other kids he picked up on things and is now well liked with many friends. She didn’t want to restrict him or have him feel different from everyone else. I think it’s a valid approach. After all Luke is on the higher end of the spectrum. He doesn’t have sensory issues, stimming behaviors, etc. It’s kind of the double edged sword of masking, right? If you mask really well people won’t think that you are struggling, when inside you are. The only person who knows just how much Luke can struggle socially is Sammy.
12/12/22, 3:31 PM
Oh I hope we get to see more of this story, this is an amazing start!

12/12/22, 3:38 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) Don't worry. I have a plan for more.