Recent Comments

12/13/22, 10:52 PM
A very intriguing start! I find this main character very wholesome -- I'll look forward to seeing how things develop!

12/14/22, 12:51 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks, time! I haven’t decided what happens next, so I’m looking forward to finding out development too.
12/13/22, 4:36 PM
Dude.... I just have to say that I love all of your stories. Every one of them is just the right mix of sweet, hot, and funny, and the characters all read like real people you could meet. Keep up the amazing work!

12/14/22, 12:50 AM
@[Kevin](/user/show/2503108) Hey, man, thanks! It’s a lot of fun and nice to be able to share my sometimes twisted sensibilities with others. Thanks for reading!
12/13/22, 4:23 PM
Oh this was fun and hot and sexy. Loved it. Would definitely enjoy more. Maybe with some rimming. Also I like how our main guy was the "top". But yeah great story!

12/14/22, 12:49 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Aw, thanks, Heru. Had to keep him the top because of the assigned tag, but it worked out, I think. Thanks for commmenting!
Anonymous
12/13/22, 9:34 PM
Loved this new chapter. I hope we get to see Luke with Mark again eventually. So far that was my favorite chapter. And I think Luke is better with Mark than with Sammy since Sammy is stuck in an emotional misconception of Luke even if he does learn the truth of the condition. Luke starting fresh with Mark means he doesn't have to worry about interacting on such a developed misconception.
Anonymous
12/13/22, 9:33 PM
I really like the story and look forward to continuing. Idea: Reese to continue torturing Nathan. And finally when Reese freed Nathan. Nathan is so attached to Rees that he never wants to leave.
12/13/22, 7:48 AM
What a simply fantastic story. A perfect blend of dominance and tenderness, lust and passion. You manage to detail the transition from reluctance to acceptance to want in a way that is realistic without either being rushed or prolonged. Fantastic job. Simply sublime.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:52 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you, Twan. This means a lot to me. Especially your comment about the story's progression and flow, because I always try to find the perfect balance. To keep the reader at the edge and excited while still telling an interesting and engaged story. It's not something I get right with each story, but you noticing that particular point extremely valuable to me!
12/13/22, 3:41 PM
I really like this. You manage to keep both characters cute and loving throughout. I did like how Noah got carried away on the weekend that Danny was fully tranced on. Feels like good set up for tension in another chapter.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:48 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I'm glad that you like it. I was afraid that I took it a bit too far, many people don't appreciate this total deletion of a person's personality. But it's something that really triggers me - at least as long as there's a way back, too. I'm already working on the second chapter. Noah is going to struggle even harder with his own desires and the situation Danny is forcing on him...
12/13/22, 3:34 PM
Hot story! I’m excited to see what happens next. And excited to read another 9 parts.

12/13/22, 6:19 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) And they are cumming.
12/13/22, 3:02 PM
Nice story. I liked it.
12/12/22, 11:49 PM
But why is this in Spiral Stories?

12/13/22, 9:39 AM
@[Theodore](/user/show/289051) It isn't, it's just in Cupid. The new update for the website has made it so all stories show up on the four websites, if you want to curate what's available for you, check Martin's announcement.