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Dylan
12/14/22, 12:42 PM
Hey Martin, even tho the plot is usually not for me, i read it without being able to stop. Well told story, great writing, plausible to the point even i could "believe" in hypnosis. But , to be honest, i felt what Noah felt as he abused the mindless sextoy that Danny turned into. It seemed like a jerkoff to a boring porn video. It helps to execute a bodily function, but doesnt quence the thirst. And in the end? The guilt Noah felt, and the emptiness, the helpless try to make it better for his hurting companion. It felt so so true, it almost hurt. Sorry, you are a great writer, but this story was not for me. Thx anyway, i always seek your advice. Dylan
12/14/22, 1:40 AM
What a great story. What I liked is how you, in a believable way, describe both the progress in Noah's techniques, aswel as the deep love and complementing desires between the two. And how Noah sexually etruly njoyed his power. Restrained only by his feelings of guilt that he might be abusing his partner. At one time, he will get convinced that this really is what Danny deeply desires. And he would feel more free t take a further step. So I am interested in what will happen then. Will he turn his boyfriend into a toy for longer periods? It would not be my ideal of fun, but it certainly seems to be so for Noah. He could find a way to make Danny work and live as a successful and social student when he is out of the house, and his sex doll while inside. Holding all the power and holding the key to the jar of Danny's personality. Permanently. Perhaps it would not satisfy him in the really long term, but he might lack the techniques to bring Danny back to his jar and open it. And he would have to turn to Gerald again for help to get Danny 'back' That would be possible only if he would be able to meet Danny inside his trance state, and take him by the hand from there. But ... how much do we know about Gerald and his reactions when he suddenly has full power over two, so cute boys???? OK, I let my fantasy drift off. Only excellent stories have that effect. So please consider that to be a big compliment for you.............

Martin
12/14/22, 9:07 AM
@[Portuguese Lion](/user/show/572598) Thank you so much for your long and amazing comment. Full of interesting ideas :) I already know exactly where I want to go with the second chapter. Some of it not far from your own ideas, other things totally different. I want to make sure that I don't start to repeat myself, which is not that easy. I might even break up the story at some point and allow separate storyline to be explored. After all this is the new feature of the site... I really appreciate your compliment, and I'll send Danny your way to show you how thankful I am!

12/14/22, 12:29 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, I am excited to hear there will be a second part!
12/14/22, 2:06 AM
This story had a nice subversion of the usual trope. It's the hypnotee that wants to become mindless and the hypnotist who is reluctant. Even feeling guilty. The lesson in hypnotist had a nice moment of resisting a command to show that it's a consensual thing. There was also no sinister element. Trying to balance a respect for his boyfriend while also giving him a fantasy he wanted was really well done. A nice representation of respect, consent, and kinky play in other arenas as well. Thanks for submitting a story! :D

Martin
12/14/22, 9:30 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Yes, you exactly pointed out what is important to me in this story. Consent and the intrications of being in power, the responsibility that comes with it. The next chapter will go even deeper down that road. For me it means a lot that the readers get what I try to achieve - in addition to make them horny and get them stained with their own cum, of course. Thank you for writing this comment! :satisfied:
12/14/22, 12:34 AM
That was honestly excellent- fun, sexy, and original, and even a bit sweet. I hope from the fact that this is chapter 1 that plenty more like this are on the way

12/14/22, 12:52 AM
@[AnonDragon](/user/show/247680) Plan is for three chapters, which I will force myself to finish before Christmas. Hope it keeps your interest throughout!
12/13/22, 10:52 PM
A very intriguing start! I find this main character very wholesome -- I'll look forward to seeing how things develop!

12/14/22, 12:51 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks, time! I haven’t decided what happens next, so I’m looking forward to finding out development too.
12/13/22, 4:36 PM
Dude.... I just have to say that I love all of your stories. Every one of them is just the right mix of sweet, hot, and funny, and the characters all read like real people you could meet. Keep up the amazing work!

12/14/22, 12:50 AM
@[Kevin](/user/show/2503108) Hey, man, thanks! It’s a lot of fun and nice to be able to share my sometimes twisted sensibilities with others. Thanks for reading!
12/13/22, 4:23 PM
Oh this was fun and hot and sexy. Loved it. Would definitely enjoy more. Maybe with some rimming. Also I like how our main guy was the "top". But yeah great story!

12/14/22, 12:49 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Aw, thanks, Heru. Had to keep him the top because of the assigned tag, but it worked out, I think. Thanks for commmenting!
Anonymous
12/13/22, 9:34 PM
Loved this new chapter. I hope we get to see Luke with Mark again eventually. So far that was my favorite chapter. And I think Luke is better with Mark than with Sammy since Sammy is stuck in an emotional misconception of Luke even if he does learn the truth of the condition. Luke starting fresh with Mark means he doesn't have to worry about interacting on such a developed misconception.
Anonymous
12/13/22, 9:33 PM
I really like the story and look forward to continuing. Idea: Reese to continue torturing Nathan. And finally when Reese freed Nathan. Nathan is so attached to Rees that he never wants to leave.
12/13/22, 7:48 AM
What a simply fantastic story. A perfect blend of dominance and tenderness, lust and passion. You manage to detail the transition from reluctance to acceptance to want in a way that is realistic without either being rushed or prolonged. Fantastic job. Simply sublime.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:52 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you, Twan. This means a lot to me. Especially your comment about the story's progression and flow, because I always try to find the perfect balance. To keep the reader at the edge and excited while still telling an interesting and engaged story. It's not something I get right with each story, but you noticing that particular point extremely valuable to me!