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12/14/22, 5:48 AM
I am *extremely* glad I put "shapeshifter" into the contest. Very well done man!!!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:50 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) It was *you!* ;) Took a while to figure out how I was gonna make it work, but it was a fun exercise. Thanks for the challenge!
12/14/22, 4:29 AM
I really enjoyed where this ended up. A smart character that can join the dots after experiencing them. Not abusing the gift and being wholesome and using it to help someone. I really hope the two coyboys reconnect and make up for lost time and are very happy together. It was a sweet tale with a lot of potential to go other places. Even in the end our main character is seeking to make a gift out of the stone's power. Sexy and sweet are a great combination. Love your work!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:48 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Hey, thanks, man. It’s great to know there’s an audience for happy tales, too, since that’s where I so often land.
12/14/22, 2:52 PM
so turned on by this story.....i'd love a bf like Noah......holy fuck yeah!
Anonymous
12/14/22, 1:49 PM
As always, this is great!! I honestly can't wait to see how this will affect the group dynamic. Would love to see our good pastor descend into even more depravity!
12/14/22, 9:24 AM
Wow. It's getting so good! I hope Lance doesn't turn into a jerk of a jock. I hope Kyle and he stay good friends and lovers. Kaden could easily become the new fuck boy for both.

12/14/22, 12:47 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) What will happen is yet to cum. All in due time.
Dylan
12/14/22, 12:42 PM
Hey Martin, even tho the plot is usually not for me, i read it without being able to stop. Well told story, great writing, plausible to the point even i could "believe" in hypnosis. But , to be honest, i felt what Noah felt as he abused the mindless sextoy that Danny turned into. It seemed like a jerkoff to a boring porn video. It helps to execute a bodily function, but doesnt quence the thirst. And in the end? The guilt Noah felt, and the emptiness, the helpless try to make it better for his hurting companion. It felt so so true, it almost hurt. Sorry, you are a great writer, but this story was not for me. Thx anyway, i always seek your advice. Dylan
12/14/22, 1:40 AM
What a great story. What I liked is how you, in a believable way, describe both the progress in Noah's techniques, aswel as the deep love and complementing desires between the two. And how Noah sexually etruly njoyed his power. Restrained only by his feelings of guilt that he might be abusing his partner. At one time, he will get convinced that this really is what Danny deeply desires. And he would feel more free t take a further step. So I am interested in what will happen then. Will he turn his boyfriend into a toy for longer periods? It would not be my ideal of fun, but it certainly seems to be so for Noah. He could find a way to make Danny work and live as a successful and social student when he is out of the house, and his sex doll while inside. Holding all the power and holding the key to the jar of Danny's personality. Permanently. Perhaps it would not satisfy him in the really long term, but he might lack the techniques to bring Danny back to his jar and open it. And he would have to turn to Gerald again for help to get Danny 'back' That would be possible only if he would be able to meet Danny inside his trance state, and take him by the hand from there. But ... how much do we know about Gerald and his reactions when he suddenly has full power over two, so cute boys???? OK, I let my fantasy drift off. Only excellent stories have that effect. So please consider that to be a big compliment for you.............

Martin
12/14/22, 9:07 AM
@[Portuguese Lion](/user/show/572598) Thank you so much for your long and amazing comment. Full of interesting ideas :) I already know exactly where I want to go with the second chapter. Some of it not far from your own ideas, other things totally different. I want to make sure that I don't start to repeat myself, which is not that easy. I might even break up the story at some point and allow separate storyline to be explored. After all this is the new feature of the site... I really appreciate your compliment, and I'll send Danny your way to show you how thankful I am!

12/14/22, 12:29 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, I am excited to hear there will be a second part!
12/14/22, 2:06 AM
This story had a nice subversion of the usual trope. It's the hypnotee that wants to become mindless and the hypnotist who is reluctant. Even feeling guilty. The lesson in hypnotist had a nice moment of resisting a command to show that it's a consensual thing. There was also no sinister element. Trying to balance a respect for his boyfriend while also giving him a fantasy he wanted was really well done. A nice representation of respect, consent, and kinky play in other arenas as well. Thanks for submitting a story! :D

Martin
12/14/22, 9:30 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Yes, you exactly pointed out what is important to me in this story. Consent and the intrications of being in power, the responsibility that comes with it. The next chapter will go even deeper down that road. For me it means a lot that the readers get what I try to achieve - in addition to make them horny and get them stained with their own cum, of course. Thank you for writing this comment! :satisfied:
12/14/22, 12:34 AM
That was honestly excellent- fun, sexy, and original, and even a bit sweet. I hope from the fact that this is chapter 1 that plenty more like this are on the way

12/14/22, 12:52 AM
@[AnonDragon](/user/show/247680) Plan is for three chapters, which I will force myself to finish before Christmas. Hope it keeps your interest throughout!
12/13/22, 10:52 PM
A very intriguing start! I find this main character very wholesome -- I'll look forward to seeing how things develop!

12/14/22, 12:51 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks, time! I haven’t decided what happens next, so I’m looking forward to finding out development too.