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12/15/22, 12:26 PM
A perfect chapter, now onto Grayson's turn. This chapter could not have been better.
12/15/22, 12:00 PM
Fantastic, great character development.I can see where you are heading.
12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/14/22, 9:34 AM
Amazing story! So real with normal doubts and pleasures from sex and control. I loved the ending. It was very hot but stayed true to life. I know I'd feel confused and unsure if I had that much control over a boyfriend. If was very enjoyable in a way many hypno stories are not. The genuine love and lust of the couple was wonderful.

Martin
12/14/22, 11:56 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you, CF! I usually try to achieve both goals, to write a story people can happily wank away to, but also give them at least a little bit of depth and meaning. Otherwise it would feel hollow. And people appreciating that means a lot!
12/14/22, 10:27 PM
Bang on theme and well structured. Not my wheelhouse (obviously 😅) but clearly gonna be a hit, If it isn’t considered one already.
12/14/22, 5:58 PM
I read this last night. Twice in a row. I love this story so very much. Not only is it hot, but it's remarkably sweet. I like that in the end, after Jed reverts to his normal form, he encourages the guy that just sucked him off to get in touch with Chase. It's nice to see a character with powers do something good for people other than himself. You have a great buildup to the smut. Jed's voice is great. His discovery of his transformation was a nice realistic touch. Shapeshifting is always a turn on for me, so this story already got bonus points for that, but having it be hot and wholesome made it an automatic favorite for me. Thanks for writing it and I look forward to seeing what other sexy situations Jed finds himself in.
12/14/22, 4:48 PM
please please continue!