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12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/14/22, 9:34 AM
Amazing story! So real with normal doubts and pleasures from sex and control. I loved the ending. It was very hot but stayed true to life. I know I'd feel confused and unsure if I had that much control over a boyfriend. If was very enjoyable in a way many hypno stories are not. The genuine love and lust of the couple was wonderful.

Martin
12/14/22, 11:56 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you, CF! I usually try to achieve both goals, to write a story people can happily wank away to, but also give them at least a little bit of depth and meaning. Otherwise it would feel hollow. And people appreciating that means a lot!
12/14/22, 10:27 PM
Bang on theme and well structured. Not my wheelhouse (obviously 😅) but clearly gonna be a hit, If it isn’t considered one already.
12/14/22, 5:58 PM
I read this last night. Twice in a row. I love this story so very much. Not only is it hot, but it's remarkably sweet. I like that in the end, after Jed reverts to his normal form, he encourages the guy that just sucked him off to get in touch with Chase. It's nice to see a character with powers do something good for people other than himself. You have a great buildup to the smut. Jed's voice is great. His discovery of his transformation was a nice realistic touch. Shapeshifting is always a turn on for me, so this story already got bonus points for that, but having it be hot and wholesome made it an automatic favorite for me. Thanks for writing it and I look forward to seeing what other sexy situations Jed finds himself in.
12/14/22, 4:48 PM
please please continue!
12/14/22, 4:15 PM
Wow. You really nail the voice here -- dialect is tricky, but you make it look easy here and it adds a lot to the experience. There's a ton of humor too, largely from the unique viewpoint you give us. I *really* love the inversion of the usual "cursed by a witch" to "unexpectedly blessed by a witch who thinks of you as family." This is a wonderfully creative interpretation of the prompts, with a lot of heart amidst the smut and fun twists on the usual tropes. Looking forward to chapter 2!
12/14/22, 6:52 AM
“ it was a man’s ass through and through, all high and round and lovingly gripped by the denim he was wearing like his pants were damn pleased for the privilege.” This sentence gets the prize! You really nailed his character voice, and the writing is so good. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing with us!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:53 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Aww, a sentence prize! I’ll take it in the form of cake. :) it’s always a satisfying challenge to get straight characters from point a to point g(ay), and that point of the story is one of my favorites.
12/14/22, 5:48 AM
I am *extremely* glad I put "shapeshifter" into the contest. Very well done man!!!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:50 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) It was *you!* ;) Took a while to figure out how I was gonna make it work, but it was a fun exercise. Thanks for the challenge!