Recent Comments

12/15/22, 1:03 PM
Grayson needs to fuck Nash as Nash dominates Dallas. Another super chapter.
12/15/22, 12:26 PM
A perfect chapter, now onto Grayson's turn. This chapter could not have been better.
12/15/22, 12:00 PM
Fantastic, great character development.I can see where you are heading.
12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/14/22, 9:34 AM
Amazing story! So real with normal doubts and pleasures from sex and control. I loved the ending. It was very hot but stayed true to life. I know I'd feel confused and unsure if I had that much control over a boyfriend. If was very enjoyable in a way many hypno stories are not. The genuine love and lust of the couple was wonderful.

Martin
12/14/22, 11:56 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you, CF! I usually try to achieve both goals, to write a story people can happily wank away to, but also give them at least a little bit of depth and meaning. Otherwise it would feel hollow. And people appreciating that means a lot!