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12/18/22, 3:09 AM
This was very well done. I loved it from start to finish. I'm real excited about chapter 2. Gonna go read it right now! Had to type this comment with one hand cuz I'm really ready for chapter 2! haha

Martin
12/18/22, 5:26 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) I hope you had the chance to read the second chapter, too? :) I hope it was ... just as stimulating for you!
12/18/22, 4:07 PM
This is a really interesting twist on things. The idea that a secondary personality of Danny’s became revealed by having him hide/throwaway/etc his primary personality was surprising and a great way to keep this fresh. Well done! I’m excited to see what happens next. I too was/am sort of expecting Gerald to turn out to have hypnotized Noah and that be what caused some of this. My vote would probably be for the Gerald option, but I’m happy to read more either way.

Martin
12/18/22, 5:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: It's always difficult to find new angles on those well-beaten story ideas. I'm really happy that this is appreciated. The Gerald option certainly seems to be the most popular, let's see what I'll come up with...
12/18/22, 1:28 AM
I like this story a lot. In many hypno stories some becomes a drone or sex slut and that's the end. I have read few stories where we hear about life after their conversion. I'm happy your story deals with the issue of "What happens after they are converted to sex toy?" It's a more complete treatment of hypno rather than just a and you're mine and then the story ends. It's more relatable because I feel for the characters especially Noah. How about a simple name for the new Danny; maybe Dirk from the movie "Boogie Nights"?

Martin
12/18/22, 5:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you so much. That's exactly the point. Even though I like "conversion to drone stories" (they make me rock hard with perfect reliability), once the deed has done, the stories are over. No matter how the author tries, it's always only a rehash. The personality is destroyed, mindless drone takes over, end of story. I love the idea that you can become someone or something else and still have your original personality buried underneath. That this identity can remember, experience and maybe even enjoy the process. That's what *I* wanted to be able to. And, as you write, it allows for way more story telling. I'll note down "Dirk". I've not seen Boogie Nights myself, but I'll look the character up.
12/17/22, 9:15 PM
What an incredible chapter! I absolutely loved the intro with Gerald: the level of detail about Noah's conflicts, the debate about hypnosis and consent, and the very real fears that people have regarding their deepest sexual fantasies are perfectly represented. The "goodbye" dinner, too, was tearjerking. It's also a fascinating mix of sexy, hilarious, and terrifying to see the person Danny becomes (the removal of the name in Noah's thoughts is a great touch): he's a sort of caricature of the "young, dumb, and full of cum," someone so cliche and stereotypical that it borders on parody. Yet we know that there's a REAL person in there, so seeing the death of Danny and the transformation into this...THING is brilliant. My own vote is to consult with Gerald, if only because he clearly understands what's going on and can provide insight (I genuinely suspected that Gerald might be some kind of villain who had secretly hypnotized Noah, but he seems to be on the up-and-up--but perhaps another twist is coming). The other options run the risk of people abusing the former Danny or the situation. And what a fascinating study of consent: can this new person do that? Can he be said to be able to consent when his inhibitions have been hypnotically removed? Thank you for creating a space to raise those questions. And finally, a name choice. Name, name...let's see. Former-Danny is operating on pure carnal desire. The sex drive alone moves him. In the days of the ancient Greeks, it was the Dionysian rites that represented this kind of pure, unmitigated sex. Dionysus was also known as Bacchus and Eleutherios (I looked them up on Wikipedia!). So I vote for Luther! :D

Martin
12/18/22, 5:16 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) What a fantastic comment, thank you so much that you spent to much thought on this. That you liked the goodbye scene is particularly good to hear. It's probably a bit kitschy, but I dig things like that, and it's fun writing about it. It's probably exactly how I would feel if I were in that situation. I didn't want to repeat the same "mindless sex toy" routine, which is why I chose a different angle this time. It also gives me a bit more potential for creating drama and just more endless sex scenes (which I love nevertheless). Thank you for your suggestions. The story needs some kind of villain, I guess, let's see what I come up with :) And Luther is ... really a brawny name, especially for a boy like this. Maybe that's why it's just the right one. Let's see if there'll be any other good ideas.
12/18/22, 12:31 AM
Your descriptions are so sensual and the world of Consummation is so delightful and has so much going on it. I love seeing all this from Talley's perspective. He's been one of my favourite characters in this universe ever since Top Maker!

12/18/22, 3:52 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I always like to talk about how Talley just popped into my life one day while writing chapter 4 and made me fall in love with him. He just adds so much adolescent joy to everything. I hope to keep all the perspectives fresh and fun, too! Looking forward to sharing more of Talley’s personality in the next chapter, and more of the wonder of Consummation.
Anon
12/18/22, 1:42 PM
Consult Gerald
Anonymous
12/18/22, 8:10 AM
Go with the third option and consult Gerald, the other two are overdone in my opinion.
DadisTopped
12/17/22, 1:33 AM
@martin not sure if you will see this but I’m hoping to merge my two accounts. I deleted my account for Bearded Bard a few years back and I would like to Merge my stories with my current account. I used a temporary email so I cannot get messages through the forum. Let me know what you suggest. Thanks.

Martin
12/17/22, 7:43 AM
Hi @[DadisTopped](/user/show/10011651) Yes, I do see this, but it's not really the best way to reach me. That would be to write an email to martin@gayspiralstories.com Also using a temporal email address is not really helpful. As you cannot be reached then. That's seriously hampering about all functions, you cannot reset your password, you won't get notified about comments and many more. There are endless ways to get an anonymous email account. There is really no good reason to use an temporal email address. You can always change the email address for your existing account (User -> Change Settings) in case you want to move an anon email account. And just write me an email with the details about what you want me to do. It's no problem to move your stories to your new account.

Anonymous
12/18/22, 2:50 AM
Hey Martin! Sent an email your way with a new email! Thanks! @[Martin](/user/show/125990)
12/17/22, 9:23 PM
Luthor uses some of the magic powder and approaches Rico.
Luthor: I'm ready for you to use me, master!
Rico: No, I'M ready for YOU to use ME, master!
Luthor: No, use ME!
Rico: No, use ME!
Python: Boys, don't fight! I'll use you both.

12/17/22, 10:34 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hey Anarchomegalomaniac!! I LIKE the way U think!!:smiling_imp: Thanks 4 the humour, positivity & continued interest-- Happy Holidaze!:sparkler:
12/17/22, 8:33 PM
Consult with Gerald! Great chapter.