Recent Comments

12/19/22, 7:17 AM
Just making it through this series for the first time, and very happy to see that some of my fave authors like Dace and Nutiper have already sung its praises. This is quickly becoming an all-time favorite for me, with its warm, fun characters, its delicious tension-building "will-we-won't-we" scenes, and it's hot hot sex. All the little supernatural types are a lot of fun too, and a fresh twist on the mind control theme that I'm thoroughly enjoying. Thank you so much for sharing your work!

12/19/22, 12:05 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) One of my favourite things to play with is suspension of desire, and the buildup that occurs when you fight or are denied what you want for a time—and I’ve had an immense amount of fun working that out through the “will-we-won’t-we” scenes, as you say. I hope to keep those a staple of this story as it progresses! Funny enough, when I first got on this site, I didn’t really have a lot of experience with the mind control kink, and it honestly made me pretty anxious to think about, the way it was commonly portrayed. But the basic ideas of loss of control and relinquishment to yours or someone else’s desires stuck, because there’s something fundamentally hot about that kind of power play, and since then I’ve been having fun writing my own (mostly) wholesome spin on MC. Designing these powers has been an exercise in making the purely benign seem risky, dangerous, and sexy in the doing, and I’m pleased with how it’s come out. So glad you’re enjoying, and I do love comments, so I’m a little bit over the moon.
12/18/22, 6:42 AM
Oh! Christmas is early this year! So happy to find out this new chapter when I opened GSS this morning. I just love Talley, but I also feel so much for Arik. Hoping hard he’ll find his way too. In the meantime, I’ve never seen such a long, loving, sensual description of a rimjob, and I guess Talley’s not the only Siren out there…

12/19/22, 11:15 AM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Aaaah, thanks for being so enthusiastic about P&FB! Yeah, I really wanted to write the hell out of this rimjob, and I’m glad it went so well. But, right, Talley isn’t the only Siren out there, although he’s the main POV for it that we’re getting. Looking forward to having more out for you! Thanks again for sharing your enthusiasm.
Jack
12/19/22, 8:29 AM
I've read every chapter/story you've written so far, and I love all of it. Part of me just wants to have Dan "convince" his dad that what he needs is to be pounded into the mattress every night, but you're the writer with the talent here, so I anxiously await more of your excellent skill. Thanks for bringing a new story to the mix, especially one that makes me cum so fucking hard!
12/19/22, 3:28 AM
Fantastic story! My vote is for Gerald.
12/18/22, 3:49 PM
I’m really enjoying this. I’m interested to see if things go awry for Lance. His feelings of unease left me wondering if that will happen soon.

12/18/22, 11:47 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Only time will tell.
blankbot
12/18/22, 7:20 PM
Like your other stories, this one is extremely well written and EROTIC.
12/18/22, 3:46 PM
Although hypnosis isn’t my thing, the comments were simply too tempting to resist seeing your take on the way this kink plays out in a real relationship. I felt for Noah the whole time, and I appreciated how you handled the conflict in his mind, from the way he lost control over the weekend to all his concerns and reluctance at different times. It was wise of you, and it made the story deeper, to write Noah as not utterly turned off by having a mindless sex toy. It wasn’t all emptiness for him, and he seemed pleased to have Danny back with him. It’s only that… well, Danny isn’t pleased. The impossible tension is enough to make me feel even as I write this comment. Well done!

Martin
12/18/22, 5:29 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I know this kind of story is problematic for you, that more it means that you took the time to read and "stand" it! :kissing_heart: I am really curious as to what you think about the 2nd chapter - especially since you are interested in the character's conflicts and feelings. And I'd hope that the 2nd chapter also makes an interesting read for you!
12/18/22, 3:09 AM
This was very well done. I loved it from start to finish. I'm real excited about chapter 2. Gonna go read it right now! Had to type this comment with one hand cuz I'm really ready for chapter 2! haha

Martin
12/18/22, 5:26 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) I hope you had the chance to read the second chapter, too? :) I hope it was ... just as stimulating for you!
12/18/22, 4:07 PM
This is a really interesting twist on things. The idea that a secondary personality of Danny’s became revealed by having him hide/throwaway/etc his primary personality was surprising and a great way to keep this fresh. Well done! I’m excited to see what happens next. I too was/am sort of expecting Gerald to turn out to have hypnotized Noah and that be what caused some of this. My vote would probably be for the Gerald option, but I’m happy to read more either way.

Martin
12/18/22, 5:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: It's always difficult to find new angles on those well-beaten story ideas. I'm really happy that this is appreciated. The Gerald option certainly seems to be the most popular, let's see what I'll come up with...
12/18/22, 1:28 AM
I like this story a lot. In many hypno stories some becomes a drone or sex slut and that's the end. I have read few stories where we hear about life after their conversion. I'm happy your story deals with the issue of "What happens after they are converted to sex toy?" It's a more complete treatment of hypno rather than just a and you're mine and then the story ends. It's more relatable because I feel for the characters especially Noah. How about a simple name for the new Danny; maybe Dirk from the movie "Boogie Nights"?

Martin
12/18/22, 5:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you so much. That's exactly the point. Even though I like "conversion to drone stories" (they make me rock hard with perfect reliability), once the deed has done, the stories are over. No matter how the author tries, it's always only a rehash. The personality is destroyed, mindless drone takes over, end of story. I love the idea that you can become someone or something else and still have your original personality buried underneath. That this identity can remember, experience and maybe even enjoy the process. That's what *I* wanted to be able to. And, as you write, it allows for way more story telling. I'll note down "Dirk". I've not seen Boogie Nights myself, but I'll look the character up.