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12/24/22, 9:45 AM
Another chapter, and so soon after the last. Very nice! I love Kyle struggling a bit with how huge his dick is. And I love Lance and Kyle both silently thinking about what the three going to wish for next, with Lance thinking things don’t feel right, only for Kaden to use the globe while they aren’t looking. The sex in this chapter was very hot, along with Lance’s transformation into Keith. I’m very eager to see what Kaden does now that he knows what the globe does. I’m a huge sucker for the bad guy winning, and Kaden was the closest thing this story had to a bad guy in the beginning. Seeing him make some wishes should be good, especially if his old selfish self is still kicking around in there.

12/24/22, 6:34 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) That is an interesting thought now isn't it? But the question is just that. Is Kaden's old selfish self still in there? And did Kaden even connect the wish to the globe?
12/23/22, 10:13 PM
That Bernard/Tim/Lex stuff was HOT HOT HOT. Love how the wheel just continues to turn and Lex is riding high on top for now. It was a great chapter for him biting out T and B so completely and recovering Dick before anything goes too far awry. With everything seemingly aligning for him not sure if that means things are about to go wrong or exactly how he wants but I imagine it's going to be super fun for us either way. Curious to see the extent of the Hypno Hustlers powers as he's someone I am pretty unfamiliar with.

12/23/22, 11:39 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi!! I'm glad that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline, especially with the current Lex/Tim/Bernard scenario!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THANKS 4 the positive comments & NRG-- I appreciate them & I'm SUPA-GR8FUL!:sparkler: BTW...I was pretty oblivious about Hypno-Hustler myself UNTIL it was just announced the other day that Donald Glover (of "Atlanta"/FX fame) who's been wanting to get cast as a superhero that he would be starring/producing a film based on this villanous character for SONY/Marvel's Spiderman universe... He's working with Myles Murphy (Eddie Murphy's son) as one of the principal writers on the film.....here's the link announcing it: https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/movies/movie-news/donald-glover-to-star-in-spider-man-movie-hypno-hustler-1235283667/ So, with ALL that I researched & learnt about the character, he seemed to be a perfect fit for what was needed in this storyline (at this juncture)!!:smiling_imp: I haven't decided EXACTLY what Dick & Rico's fates will be YET (but I welcome any input/thoughts/inspiration from YOU or any other interested parties!)!!:boom: And BTW...I noticed that your "avatar" is Jensen Ackles/"Supernatural"-- :fire: I've just recently been catching up with the mega-15 season run this show has had on NETFLIX, which was created by Eric Kripke (who's also the brainchild behind Amazon Prime's "The Boys"/Superhero series)...Jensen really kicked ass as "Soldier Boy" in Season 4--:muscle: I hope they bring him back (somehow)!!:smirk_cat: All I can tell you is that.....You can be SURE that the Hypno-Hustler scene will be EXTRA:fire:~!!!!!! Ho Ho Ho & Merry XXXXmas, my friend!!:santa:

12/24/22, 12:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Your very welcome as the positive comments were very earned!!!! ;) As far as comment/input about Dick and Rico. I think it might be fun to see them struggle at the hands of the Hypno Hustler. Might be fun to seem them being conscious of his control mentally but no fully able to snap out of it? Not sure if you have ideas in mind. I would love to see Dick's overall trajectory turn move him towards going dark and becoming more of a villain who has a plan to wrest control of the others? As for Rico I wonder if it might be interesting to see what happens if his dust eventually wears off before he ever gets Dick's dick like he so desperately desires. Maybe leave some unfinished business between the guys so they'll have this sizzling sexual tensions where they're enemies but they still want each other. And Rico is angry at himself for being subjugated but secretly remembers his time as Dick's thrall fondly. As far as Jensen he's probably my absolute biggest celeb crush and Dean is one of my favorite characters of all time. Hope you're enjoying Supernatural. I really enjoyed it even if it was a little up and down in my opinion. I agree that Jensen killed it as Soldier Boy and I definitely was happy to see him beef up for the role :P I also have the sneaking suspicion he'll pop up here or there in season 4 but I don't imagine he'll be a regular again.

12/24/22, 4:42 AM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Ho Ho Ho Fanboi!! THANKS again 4 the quick response & I sincerely appreciate the continued praise/positivity!:raised_hands: I'm taking your thoughtful points about Dick & Rico to heart & will figure out a storyline that adequately suits some/most of your suggestions! :wink: As 4 Jensen (as Dean), I TOTALLY agree with YOU-- from what I've seen so far on "Supernatural" (I've made it thru MOST of Season 1!) & I feel that he's a bit of "a tortured sole/character" (especially w/respect to his Dad & things that happened when he & Sam were younger boys) --at least that's what I'm picking up on so far ....but he's DEFINITELY "the hottie" on the show!:zany_face: With him as Soldier Boy on "The Boys"....they BETTER bring him back in Season 4 (which isn't gonna be released until mid-2023...that's what they're saying!):thinking: I'll do my BEST to setup the NEXT Chapter (Ch.39) over the weekend & get it uploaded right after Xmas!:supervillain: Hope Santa brings U everything you desire this year-- Merry XXXMas & Happy Holidaze!!:santa:
12/22/22, 4:43 AM
Loved the first chapter, like, A LOT. It’s almost precisely bang on for my own personal fetish (just missing bigger muscles, latex, and some technological bits and bobs but that’s all just window dressing). Unlike the others, I’m definitely not a fan of this new Danny, at all, and even a bit pissed at Danny himself. Right about the dinner scene and Danny’s seemingly “meh” commentary on how Noah’s behaving of essentially “Oh yeah, right. I get it…but I look forward to what this means for meeeee,” is where it went kaboom for me. Aside from the fascinating method Noah used, it kind of went downhill from there. That all being said, in for a penny, in for a pound. I’ve always enjoyed your stories and the Birthday Gift story is one of my all time favorite stories from any author. I’m definitely curious to how this progresses and agree the next step should be Gerald. I could easily see this story head in a comedy direction, dark and twisted direction, heartbreaking direction, or a happy-ending type of direction. It’ll be interesting to see where this goes and if it’ll be agile enough to make visits to all the stations without any one of them knocking the train off the tracks. (Begin terrible cartoonish French accent) Ze bar, he has been set high, no monsieur? Should you encounter difficulties, I’m sure we can scrounge up another drone gun to “help you along,” yes? ;) (/end terrible cartoonish French accent)

Martin
12/23/22, 11:44 AM
@[Null0byte](/user/show/210784) I wanted to write a story without rubber for a change, and without any technology or fantasy elements besides a maybe little bit of over-the-top hypnosis, i.e. a simple mind-control story. It's great to hear and a huge boost for my motivation to know that there are people out there liking my particular stories, so thank you very much for that encouragement. I've been thinking a lot on how to continue with the next chapter. It's just all too apparent that this new slutty cum-addicted boy isn't that well-liked by the biggest part of my audience. Let's see what I'll come up with now... :innocent:

12/24/22, 4:39 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I get it, and just finally being able to actually go into trance after a lifetime of trying I love the straight-up hypnosis frame. I’m looking forward to seeing what your imagination cooks up!
Sebastián Apollo
12/18/22, 9:42 PM
It's rare that a story can make me laugh, intrigue me, and make me totally hard all while being well-written and providing ample opportunities for characterization. Marco is an absolute stud, Nate is lovable and rootable, Arik is definitely in a new domain, and I love seeing Talley embracing his role as a Siren and a power bottom! Consummation, as always, provides ample opportunities for unique and sexy stories, and this has already delivered in droves. Brilliant work, Soren. And I'm looking forward to see where this goes. _(And an obligatory thank you for the mention towards The Bootyguard, but I'm afraid my own writing skills lack in comparison to yours. But it's most appreciated!)_

12/24/22, 2:34 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) It's a pleasure to hear that P&FB is pulling off all I wanted for it—I want to make it this exciting, hilarious romp through a fantasy world, and it sounds like that's coming across. It's also good to hear that Nate's a character that feels worthy of being rooted for. He's definitely got a satisfying journey ahead of him, and I'll be drawing that out in chapter 7... I'm excited to keep drawing this out! Thanks for the comment; I've definitely gone back to read this a few times, haha.
12/24/22, 12:04 AM
Nice! I love turnabout stories. Kyle copying Lance’s body, his muscles, his cock and his balls is hot. Kyle getting more dominant and his memories changing to reflect Kaden sucking his big dick is hot. Kyle remembering how Kaden was before still is hot. The descriptions in this chapter really added heat for me. Picturing their eyes and hair color, and Kyle reflecting on his own changed body, just really turned it up a notch. Thanks!!! I’m wondering if Kaden will get his turn with the globe next. I’ll be happy either way, but can’t wait to find out. I’m also wondering if they remember the last 3 wishes they each made, or if it’s just the last 3 wishes that can be remembered. As in, does Lance now only remember the last wish he made, or the last 3 he made? I wonder if that will result in him forgetting he ever used the globe at all. All fun questions to think about and find out in the last 5 parts. I’m still enjoying this story so much.

12/24/22, 1:15 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Glad I could make it work. One mechanic is that the user remembers the last three wishes. Lance actually doesn’t have any idea of Kyle’s wishes. Lance only remembers his own as well as the new reality Kyle created. Will Kaden get a turn? Only time will tell.
12/23/22, 10:16 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I love the setup, with Lance making wishes every morning and only remembering the last 3. I love his flat mates. Kaden being a bit of a bully and Kyle going from bottom twink who loves Lance as Daddy to being a twunk daddy. It’s all very hot. I also do really appreciate how quickly you are getting each part out. Every day I’m anticipating another part with excitement. More description would be chef’s kiss for me. Some hint of what you thought Kyle looked like as a daddy, or how tall Lance is compared to both of the others. This bit in this part is gold to me: “ Jet after jet spits out of his massive cock as a pool forms on the tile floor.” It makes the story so much richer, to me, if the author and the characters (via the omniscient narrator) mention / are aware of differences between each other, or in relation to the rest of the world.

12/23/22, 7:59 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I can do that. the only reason I wasn't doing that was because of feedback in the past that indicated that people wanted to draw up their own images of the characters. As well as focus on the mental struggles that happen to highlight that more. Since you requested it, I can definitely focus on their physical descriptions next chapter.

12/23/22, 9:14 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I hope that the next chapter will address this request and appease.

12/23/22, 11:14 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks for the reply. And the story writing! I hope you took away more from my comment than just “more description”. I have been genuinely enjoying the story and your writing a ton and am eagerly anticipating every new chapter. If you feel like writing more description, and feel it fits, I would love it. But that’s my personal taste. When I read a story, I want the writer to fill my mind with enough of a complete image, partially because I’m not terribly creative without a lot of effort and I’m lazy and don’t want to work to inject specifics. For the average story, a character’s hair color and style don’t have to matter, but they can help flesh out a lot of details. I’ll think differently about a guy with a shaved head vs long hair, with a baseball cap forward or back, with an earring. I can inject those things into the image in my mind, but again, I’m lazy and won’t. And won’t be consistent with them from reading to rereading. Everyone else definitely doesn’t agree with me. Some people definitely want fewer details. Some people want a complete blank slate. I can’t handle reading Lord the Rings myself; I don’t need to know what every individual blade of grass on a random, never reappearing grassy knoll looks like. I do like details that fill in a character. Kyle responding to Lance’s body, Lance responding to how much different or better he feels his body is to Kaden or Kyle, or anything else along those lines, really builds them both up and brings me more into the scene. Again, that’s just my personal tastes. Please only do what you want. I wasn’t kidding when I said the descriptions would be chef’s kiss for me - on an already great story. The most important thing is: please keep writing it. And thanks for writing :)

12/23/22, 11:15 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks! That makes me even more excited about the next chapter :)

12/23/22, 11:37 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Oh I did take all that away from what you said and am deeply grateful that you are enjoying this story so much. Your kind remarks and compliments do me so much good that you have no idea. I have a learning disability around writing so it's always a challenge. I use Grammarly a lot to help with the editing. Basically, what I am saying is your high praise fills me with so much pride about the hard work I put into stories. It helps quite the voice in my head that sometimes tells me to give it up.

12/23/22, 11:53 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Keep writing :) But do it for yourself! If you find your stories hot, someone else will. Easier said than done tho. Tough to ignore doubts and all that. Glad you’re liking the comments. They were always good fuel for me too when I was writing.
Anonymous
12/23/22, 4:53 PM
Christmas came early, and so did I! Excellent charter, as always

12/23/22, 10:21 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! It sat in drafts longer than I would have liked, but I was determined to get it out before the end of the year.
12/23/22, 4:30 PM
There's some great character work in this chapter and the conjugal conjugation scene was very playful and funny!

12/23/22, 10:20 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks! It was fun writing it.
12/23/22, 1:20 PM
I’m still very into the asshole nerd Lewis fucking jaces brains out. Obviously the romantic in me likes the thought of Jace and booker ending up together. But a couple of nerdy fuck boys along the way makes sense to me.

12/23/22, 10:19 PM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thanks for reading! No spoilers, but I do like to mix some spice in with the sweetness when I write smut.