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12/29/22, 6:29 PM
Thoughtful lore builder, which still manages swift pacing. I want follow-up chapters and more action, and more... TFing. Keep. it. up.
12/29/22, 6:28 PM
Fantastic story! Heartfelt and perfect for the holiday season. Cockatrice, you do an amazing job of developing the emotions and bitter-sweetness of it all while keeping the hope up. One more story where you show us just how talented you are. Kudos!
12/29/22, 4:40 PM
Hoping for a part 2, as the condition progresses!! I also love the clinical professional & nature of Dr. Carson. It’s an interesting juxtaposition to the craven & animalistic Impulses of the characters afflicted with JPS. Unique on this site. Bravo!
12/29/22, 2:17 PM
One thing that would be interesting would be see the parents and teachers calling for a meeting for them to find out what to do with the dogs, only for them to pull a prank that turns everyone in the meeting into canines too, and after the orgy, the Doberman principal says they need too ensure the whole school is turned, and gets back into being fucked by the Rottweiler coach
12/27/22, 4:48 PM
This was such a sweet, sexy story! I loved the boathouse setting, it felt perfect for a preppy story. If you write a sequel, I hope the blond pledge gets involved! ;)

12/28/22, 12:59 PM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thank you! Nothing felt more preppy to me than a school with a boathouse and a rowing club :smile: If in the off-chance I do write a sequel, there are some directions I could take to build on the world and its characters :relaxed:
12/27/22, 3:47 PM
I really enjoyed the subtle, story-wide buildup to their sudden, almost unexpected kiss in the boathouse—it’s a really clever juxtaposition, and deftly done. And I can’t fail to mention how hot I found the piss scene, because it perfectly captures the “boyish power play” that I love so much, a sort of sexual spontaneity from which the victim neither can nor desires to escape. Very successfully sexy! Thanks for this contribution to Cupid. I’m always on the lookout for more Cupid exclusives.

12/28/22, 12:57 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I'm happy that you enjoyed the story, and also that the piss scene was something you found hot. Honestly, that part was the one I really thought long and hard about on how to incorporate with the other tags, as someone who is only slightly familiar with the kink, but it was really fun writing about new kinks with characters I really wanted to develop. Thank you for taking the time to read the story!
12/25/22, 6:01 PM
What a delightful end to a delightful story in a delightful setting. Consummation is so, so fun and hot. Truly the setting us fantasy pervs have been waiting for. Thanks for sharing all your hard work, and really looking forward to reading more!

12/27/22, 6:30 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Trust me, I'm so grateful to be able to write in Consummation! It's evolved a lot since a couple of my friends and I first put its very basics together, and now it's sort of become my baby, but it feels like there's so much wonder to explore and I just want to write all of it. If I'm getting what you mean by "fantasy pervs"--the wonder, mysterious magic, and escapism of portal fantasy are at the very roots of what I've come to love so much about fantasy, and I try to capture that feeling for the reader even while the characters are totally immersed into a fantastical world that's simply normal for them. And I definitely get that feeling as the writer, haha. I'm always looking forward to writing more! Next chapter of P&FB will hopefully be very magical, and I can't wait to share it.
12/27/22, 5:19 AM
What struck me the most about this story was the gentle, romantic relationship between the two roomies. I was really charmed by their connection!

12/27/22, 11:57 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Gotta love gay yearning :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
12/27/22, 1:28 AM
Great tale! I agree, those were some tricky tags but you managed to incorporate them in a hot, cohesive way that made sense for the characters and the story. I enjoyed the wholesome concern for each other plus, who can argue with a beer that brings out an uninhibited himbo horny self in your buddy! Bravo!

12/27/22, 11:53 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Aww thank you, I definitely wanna work on writing a story where wholesome and piss blend together as major themes in a story but I love the story nonetheless. Glad you enjoyed it too <3
12/27/22, 3:20 AM
Ooh man this was hot and sexy and fun. Such a great set up. So much sexiness. So much fun! Love the image of a bent over hairy ass. Too bad he didn't rim him before fucking him as he had a great opportunity. But yeah, sexy sexy story!