Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/2/23, 8:16 PM
Great second installment! While Jace and Booker's dynamic is endearing, I eagerly am looking forward to Jace becoming the frat bicycle lol.

1/2/23, 9:48 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! Hopefully I can pull off both without getting too dark or too sappy.
Martin
1/2/23, 9:38 PM
Fuck, what an amazing world you've been creating! Can't wait to see how you're going to fill it! It reeks hottness to come out of every single line!
1/2/23, 3:54 PM
😅 You got lumped with with one of my tag submissions; object transformation., clever interpretation, but I’m hoping one of the remaining wishes sees some object transformation! :crossed_fingers: I think your idea of doing a chapter-per-wish is quite novel and fun and well though out.

1/2/23, 7:53 PM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I am guessing that you are hoping one of them gets turned into an object. Is that the case? Also, I am very touched that you commented on one of my stories. I respect you like crazy!

1/2/23, 8:26 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Exactly man. Or at least that's the 'spirit of it.' You certainly got the other two in the pocket. I will admit of the ones I submitted, ObjectTF was always gonna be the most esoteric and specific (and challenging). No need for the respect, dude, we're all brothers here. I'm gonna read, rate and comment the three stories that got the tags I submitted, (figured it might be a fun way to give back a bit, to the Secret Santa challenge). So after this, I'm gonna go find the ones that got my other tags, read 'em and do the same.
1/2/23, 7:35 AM
Happy New Year! What happens to our boys?!

1/2/23, 7:52 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Oh yes! I was asked to be an emergency writer for another Secret Santa story.
1/2/23, 4:59 PM
You have an enviable knack for voices.
12/12/22, 2:21 PM
i love this story. these two innocent boys just having good natural curious times. I am loving this story and I enjoy your writing style.

1/2/23, 11:31 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man! I’m glad you enjoy it. Definitely more to come!
1/2/23, 12:50 AM
I appreciate that our POV isn't instantly becoming better, that it's taking him some time. It seems like Mike has been thinking about this for a while, and has been more certain of and content with what he wants than the main character.

1/2/23, 11:28 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Yes that’s what I was trying to convey. I didn’t mention it specifically but Mike’s actions from the beginning on should hint that he is more aware of what he is doing and what he wants. He’s more fearful that the main character won’t accept him while our main hero struggles more with self acceptance. Things take a shift after chapter 3 though ;)
1/2/23, 9:49 AM
Wow! What a fantastic story! The ending was just perfect. It felt like a Christmas Film which is some of the highest praise i can give.