Recent Comments

5/27/25, 8:38 PM
I think it’s a pretty good concept, and the story is not bad. Everything happens so fast not a criticism just an observation. Why not take your time to spin out the story a bit more to capture what the “hero”is thinking as well
5/27/25, 7:59 AM
Fantastic story! Please keep it on, maybe during the week the twins could try a double fuck on their horny coach....

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) Good idea, the twins have plenty of things in mind for their coach!
5/26/25, 12:40 PM
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more.

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Thanks for reading and commenting!
5/26/25, 3:36 AM
Wonderful chapter. It's steamy and delightful and builds well on what you've already written. I'm excited for the next chapter. One question, I don't recall Zeke being mentioned in chapter 1 when Bart and Charles named the staff. Did he take the place of either Stan or Tom? Or did Bart and Charles not know Zeke?

5/26/25, 3:07 PM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) I renamed Stan to Zeke because I was worried everybody's names were sounding a little too similar- Bart and Charles were intentionally named that way, but I thought I had too many "A" sounds in the cast, so I decided to give Stan a new name, since he hadn't been introduced on-page yet, but forgot to edit the first chapter to correct it. That's what happens when you post a continuous story in a serial format!

5/27/25, 3:10 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Awesome! Thank you for clarifying ☺️. It's really great and I love the change. Just wanted to be sure I wasn't going insane. 🥰
Anonymous
5/26/25, 7:53 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter !!!!
Lonka
5/26/25, 7:03 PM
This story made me feel weird. In a good way. I cant even describe that feeling. Just wow. I am just so happy that Brian got what he deserved and we got a happy end after all this. Wow.
Muscle-Flex
5/26/25, 4:23 PM
Noah, I’ll admit, it’s real nice of ya to help the big guy put his old bitch of a girlfriend out of mind, but you crafty SOB, turning up the sexual wiring in Liam’s chest? Now the dude is practically gonna splooge his shorts every time you give him a titty twist. Bench presses at the gym are going to be real interesting. I guess Liam will just have to power through 'em. Builds character and all that. And yeah, I see that cocky smirk on your face, man. It’s only Friday night and you got the whole weekend with the self-doubting stud. BUT… you’ve been using tricks – alcohol, drugs – well, we shall see how Liam feels tomorrow morning, especially when he wakes up covered in ball cream… more than ever! He may not be so willing to take another pill on Saturday night! Then what’ya gonna do, huh? Did ya think about that, boy? You may have got yourself in trouble. You’re fit and all, but so is Liam, and he’s bigger. Guess we’ll have to wait and see how he reacts on Saturday. :muscle:

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:49 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) NOAH: yea, dude, im trying to help the guy, just that. like its good for him to develop resistence so yea, i know what u mean, he probably needs a bit more titty training and all. nah, man, no tricks, just fun is all, he grabbed my fucking cock, i didnt do anything fuck that. LMAOOO little liam do smth against me? fucking yeah right
5/26/25, 12:28 PM
Noah, I bet you can't convince Liam to let you sit on his face.

Anonymous
5/26/25, 5:40 PM
@[MrSirTurtle](/user/show/910203) Sounds like Noah suffocating Liam.

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:44 PM
@[MrSirTurtle](/user/show/910203) NOAH: i dont want no one up my fucking ass dude, hed probably like that tho lmaoo
Anonymous
5/25/25, 3:00 PM
Noah, do you think you can ever love Liam?

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:42 PM
@Anonymous NOAH: the fuck? he's a gym buddy, im not gay dude
Anonyme
5/25/25, 1:22 PM
Pls more foot things ! But the story is excellent !

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:40 PM
@Anonyme NOAH: glad y'all like my feet? idk man