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5/23/25, 12:30 PM
Jack, I always wonder how you will outdo yourself and you always do

5/28/25, 7:51 AM
Amazing, Jack. Thanks. 🔥🔥🔥
5/27/25, 9:43 PM
Good art is worth the wait. Never apologize for the process of creation. This story is too good to rush!

5/28/25, 1:01 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) This is high praise, coming from you, my friend! Thank you!
Sub Jock
5/26/25, 12:53 AM
Noah, should I be worried about growing my glutes too much at the gym? Also, what gym clothing would you recommend?

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:43 PM
@Sub Jock NOAH: nah, man, the bigger the better, chicks dig it, trust me, keep making it bigger, and use those tight things, you know the ones i mean, that go all the way up, good for form

Sub Jock
5/27/25, 9:44 PM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) If you say so Noah, I'll keep it tight and make sure I'm in my proper position for good form. Though the more I train my glutes and pecs, the more sensitive they get. I swear I feel a jolt every time anything brushes either. That's good right?
5/27/25, 9:38 PM
Can't wait for more
5/27/25, 8:38 PM
I think it’s a pretty good concept, and the story is not bad. Everything happens so fast not a criticism just an observation. Why not take your time to spin out the story a bit more to capture what the “hero”is thinking as well
5/27/25, 7:59 AM
Fantastic story! Please keep it on, maybe during the week the twins could try a double fuck on their horny coach....

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) Good idea, the twins have plenty of things in mind for their coach!
5/26/25, 12:40 PM
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more.

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Thanks for reading and commenting!
5/26/25, 3:36 AM
Wonderful chapter. It's steamy and delightful and builds well on what you've already written. I'm excited for the next chapter. One question, I don't recall Zeke being mentioned in chapter 1 when Bart and Charles named the staff. Did he take the place of either Stan or Tom? Or did Bart and Charles not know Zeke?

5/26/25, 3:07 PM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) I renamed Stan to Zeke because I was worried everybody's names were sounding a little too similar- Bart and Charles were intentionally named that way, but I thought I had too many "A" sounds in the cast, so I decided to give Stan a new name, since he hadn't been introduced on-page yet, but forgot to edit the first chapter to correct it. That's what happens when you post a continuous story in a serial format!

5/27/25, 3:10 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Awesome! Thank you for clarifying ☺️. It's really great and I love the change. Just wanted to be sure I wasn't going insane. 🥰
Anonymous
5/26/25, 7:53 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter !!!!
Lonka
5/26/25, 7:03 PM
This story made me feel weird. In a good way. I cant even describe that feeling. Just wow. I am just so happy that Brian got what he deserved and we got a happy end after all this. Wow.