Recent Comments

4/15/23, 6:19 PM
Wow. You know what? I really loved that.

4/15/23, 8:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I was unsure about publishing it on this site but your comment already made it worth it.
4/15/23, 10:18 AM
That was a fun ride, thanks

4/15/23, 6:00 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it. There's a stand alone Fantasy Models story coming shortly then I might move to another or maybe new series
Nutiper
4/15/23, 3:38 PM
I love that the nerds' Magneto-helmet protections against Carter's powers are literally just tin foil hats disguised as cultist hoods. Also, the idea that Carter's going to try turning the entire nerd army into enthusiastic self-lubing buttsluts is somehow very funny to me. That's right, nerds! Sublimate your misguided rage and aggression at the world into enthusiastic power-bottoming!! Aah, brings me back to my college days...
4/15/23, 12:27 AM
I’m so happy to see you continuing this. I love Ig, Brook and Carter, and love the tension between the three of them. Fantastic characters.
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
4/13/23, 11:59 PM
The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.
Test
4/13/23, 12:23 PM
Amazing writing. It's electric ⚡⚡

CasualWanderer82
4/13/23, 3:54 PM
@[Test](/user/show/10000638) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
4/13/23, 12:48 PM
What a FUN WONDERFUL STORY!
4/13/23, 6:09 AM
“Luca” feels like a good name for him.

Martin
4/13/23, 9:06 AM
@[RevivedKelsier](/user/show/10003625) :thumbsup: