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Anonymous
8/19/19, 2:42 PM
Excellent. A little more development would make it better. Loved the idea!

4/16/23, 8:30 PM
@Anonymous Hope you enjoy the reworked version to answer your comment from 2019 :)
4/16/23, 6:54 PM
incredible. Exceptional. Amazing writing.
4/16/23, 5:56 PM
This series has a lot of potential so far. The MC aspects have been very downplayed, but sometimes I like it when they are secondary to a story, rather than the focus. Independent of those, this is still a very good story that seamlessly blends found family tropes and poly-adjacent fun around a poignant core of sexual self-discovery. Bravo so far, and eager to see what comes next!
4/16/23, 1:25 PM
I love your stories so much and this new one is just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing stories in the “dumb jock” genre. These are my favorite stories ever and I will never not want more and more stories just like this one and Brocurious. Can’t wait for more, man!!! Thank you!!
4/16/23, 7:22 AM
TPE can be really hot if it works well for both Dom and sub. For me the level of control is hot, but is more than offset negatively by the brutality and apparent lack of empathy Marcus shows for Tony. When Marcus's dark side is made very apparent, the story became more of a horror story. It will be interesting to see in the next chapters if Marcus has any redeeming intent or character. I certainly don't see how he can make this up to Tony. I suppose it is good when appeal for this kind of behavior and outcome can be fully assuaged by our reading fiction. Hopefully we don't act it out in real life.
4/14/23, 9:02 AM
Excellent work!I read this three times and noticed that coffee could make the emission of Courage caffeined. Does that also mean Dr D make Courage’s cum ego-altering by spiking his tea and since he drink so much cum that he inadvertently change his own ego(become less evil)?

4/16/23, 2:08 AM
@[goodpuppy](/user/show/10023640) Thanks! Yes, Dr. Darkness sets up his own downfall here by trying to poison Courage with caffeine, not realizing specifically what it does in this universe.
4/16/23, 12:55 AM
Too bad Christian chose the miserable route. I was hoping he could be brave and be honest with himself and Jacob.
4/15/23, 9:55 PM
i love this guy. He is so lovable and gullible. Thanks for the great storytelling.. You really are GREAT

4/15/23, 10:45 PM
Thanks for keeping me motivated I’m happy you enjoy Jake’s character. @[MChicago](/user/show/10024403)
4/15/23, 8:11 PM
Love the story! Can't wait for more!!

4/15/23, 10:44 PM
Glad you love it, can’t wait to write and share more! @[Taylor](/user/show/2690062)
4/15/23, 1:32 AM
A very good start!

4/15/23, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the Feedback!@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171)