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Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:02 PM
i have to be honest here. i was dissapointed with this continuation. when you go back and read pollination, not only was it hot & sexy but it showed a community being built & brought together. it seemed that more and more chapters had branching out characters that brought more and more men into the fold. now, not only do we lack the sex and seeing more and more guys being brought into the fold, but we are actively watching that community being torn apart. i felt that the fun was completley sucked out, and replaced with ??? i don't even know what it was replaced with. does the writer hate his own series? it felt like there was an actual hatred for the alien symbionts. go back to the earlier chapters. the men loved their symbionts. there was a bonding not only with the alien, but with the other men. and now it's all gone.

11/20/25, 11:12 PM
@Anonymous There's a lot to address here -- wish me luck. I make no secret of the fact that I wish I'd never written POLLINATION: the SERIES in the first place. I'm not judging the quality of the work, but I wish I'd left the original story on its own like I'd always intended. In P:TS, the mistake I made was in trying to elevate the threat so as not to become a redundant "And Then The Same Thing Happened To Bob" kind of story. I created what I consider to be the greatest blunder of the whole thing: the Great Ones. I believe the intrusion of the Great Ones killed what I was originally trying to do with the plot and forced me to take the story in a different direction -- looking back on it now, I wish I'd never done that. Part of my motivation in Season Two and Three was to get back to my original conceit. That said, I've had the uber-plot written in my head since Season One -- I've hinted at it from time to time in different ways -- but I always expected Season Three to end where it did, The conflict in the current book has been in the process since Season One, as a matter of fact. Ironically, I really enjoyed writing Season Three and I'm excited to pick it up again where I've left it because I'm going to be able to do what I wanted to do with it in the first place. I have a Season Four in mind (and Five!), but I had to clear the detritus. I'm sorry you didn't like it -- I really truly am -- but understand that I love these characters enough to do horrible things to them. And I went WAY over my initial word count because I was enjoying myself so much. There it is -- you can't go home again.

Anonymous
11/21/25, 3:57 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) i can understand and respect everything you said. it just felt like season 3 was such a drastic change from everything that came before. so to me, it sounds like it's not so much a tearing down of what you have built, but a "course-correction"? okay. I can roll with that. because i always felt season 1 was always the best. so if you're trying course-correct back to those ideas or away from the great ones, I would have to agree that this could be a good thing. it was just so hard for me to stomach page after page of men hating their symbionts. I guess when I first read pollination, as a reader, i fantasized having one slide down into my balls. and I imagine every other reader wanted the same thing. and then you gave us season 3 in which you seemed to say no no no, that's bad. it was such a whiplashing u-turn from what I had so love to read.

11/21/25, 1:00 PM
@Anonymous Once the aliens revealed themselves to be the bad guys in Season 2, it stopped being such a party. Suddenly, the men found themselves enslaved to the Great Ones and they were terribly abused at the Kansas Farm, endlessly planting their seed. So I think you're right in Season One being a lighter tone and men more excited about their transformations, but I think Season Two turned that page. Also bear in mind that the entirety of Season Three is just a little over 24 hours. I've kept the characters I like and if you've read me before, you know nobody ever dies forever. I think "reset" is an excellent way to think about it, but there was a lot of shit to get through.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
11/20/25, 7:58 PM
Your skill of world building, when the focus is just two characters is crazy good. We have slang like “the howl” and literature that exists, which makes everything feel more alive. Awesome story.
11/20/25, 1:22 PM
Tomorrow will tell a tale

11/20/25, 2:20 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Surely everything will be alright in the morning after a good night’s sleep…
11/20/25, 5:55 AM
Can't wait for more

11/20/25, 11:19 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) More is coming :wink:
Willie Cici
11/20/25, 2:58 AM
This was incredible. Well written and hot and sexy. A good slow boil story. Keep writing. You have a knack for it.

11/20/25, 11:18 AM
@Willie Cici Hot Dam! Pretty awesome to hear that kinda feedback from someone whose stories are some of my go-to favourites. Thanks very much.
11/20/25, 2:07 AM
Oh this is EXCELLENT. Cannot WAIT for the next chapter — you’ve struck my favorite balance, of something hot and also well-written. I’m curious about these characters and want to know more!

11/20/25, 11:14 AM
@[Lazyboyxn](/user/show/908476) Thanks very much. I’m really glad you enjoyed it, and I hope the next chapter will be worth waiting for :grin:
aerocide
11/19/25, 8:10 AM
Yessss omg so good! Can’t wait for the next chapter already! Hoping to see some more assplay, mindfuck/humiliation and hopefully maybe even some chastity 👀

11/19/25, 6:31 PM
@aerocide dude thanks! oh yeah all of that is coming tbh lmao
11/18/25, 2:07 PM
Very cool story, I really like the idea, and Dallas and Greg make for a cute couple! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
11/17/25, 11:29 PM
Sure wish it had of been me getting seduced by Master Troy,Brilliant story.