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puppy boi
7/28/23, 7:10 PM
These series is so good and hot on so many levels.. like pls i can't wait to see how this continues...

7/29/23, 2:06 AM
@puppy boi Oh thank you so much. I do have the next part all planned out, I just have too many stories I need to write and finding time to get to it is tough right now.
7/28/23, 9:01 PM
Love this! Would also love more.
7/28/23, 4:42 PM
Hot, you should do more of this.
Jul 22, 2023
7/27/23, 12:54 PM
Great story! What a fantastic makeover. I love that Adonis Ken is just as connected to his kids as dutiful Dad Steve. Interesting too to see the positive impact of Ken’s perfect genes and fabulousness on future Asher.
7/26/23, 1:47 PM
Awesome story, I could not put it down!!!!

7/26/23, 10:37 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you for the kind words. Knowing the length of the story, I know that couldn't have been an easy task, haha!
Jul 22, 2023
7/25/23, 10:13 PM
I think this actually transcends smut, though it certainly has all the requisite features required, because I've left the story not only knowing poor drab Steve, but also knowing Liberace Ken, and both were fascinating studies. I liked how the transformations that took place were gradual and seemed to happen with the situations he was in. The only thing that confused me was the Future-Asher appearance. Was that literally just a random dream?

7/26/23, 12:04 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the nice words! The dream was meant to foreshadow not only the drastic transformation Steve would go through, but also the "butterfly effect" of it affecting everyone around him, including his family (and, I guess, his DNA!)
7/25/23, 1:47 PM
Your characters are so real and so fucking hot. You sell their straightness so well that when we watch them doing gay things it feels all the hotter! Every little scene from beginning to end is fun as hell, one romp after another, and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. You wrapped everything up perfectly. This is a real winner.

7/25/23, 10:53 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you for the kind words, Soren. I had a lot of fun outlining and writing the characters, so I'm especially glad to hear that folks enjoyed them. > and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. Oh, I believe you! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
7/25/23, 3:17 AM
That was terrific. Can't wait to see who the author is.

7/25/23, 10:48 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) We shall see! :wink:
7/25/23, 7:36 PM
this series is amazing, and i cant wait for you to explore the awesome potential it has!!!! :DDDD
7/25/23, 6:03 AM
This chapter was PERFECT! In addition to seeing all of the already-massive guys indulging in their size, we get to see how the food affects everyone on the base. Watching Will and Connor slowly getting seduced by the food--and especially Will justifying why he's getting fatter--is incredibly hot. They both seem aware of what's happening, but something is making them powerless to stop. That, plus the guys getting more affectionate, cuddly, and lazier, makes for an even better chapter than before. I can see why these scenes are your favorites--awesome work! :D