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1/4/26, 7:59 PM
I love this story.
1/4/26, 7:55 PM
Hot second part. Looking forward to more.
d-boi
1/4/26, 7:23 PM
How tragic. This unit felt it was a given that Souta would be forced into the System as early as chapter 1. Even so, it was surprised it happened so soon. It hopes that the two may in some way reunite.
1/4/26, 3:56 PM
That last part. Ooph. Kinda was expecting betrayal, but a deal is a deal. Ah well.
1/2/26, 5:43 PM
Nah, I don't believe in coincidences. First Hayato, then Haru, and then Souta. The System is watching them and used their relationships to lure them into it one by one. And Twelve's previous life was likely related to Souta. Could Twelve be Souta's dad but nanobots altered his appearance, making him younger and unrecognizable? The fact that Souta instinctively called out "Dad" was quite intriguing. Perhaps the system will eventually reunite all the family members, including Haru's father? Can't wait to see the next chapter!

1/4/26, 8:48 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Well, the System doesn't think of itself as being insidious. It only has the best interests of the people in its custody in 'mind' - and humanity in general. If human beings would agree with this, had they any say, is a very different question, though :) Twelve is not Souta's dad (now THAT would be insidious, wouldn't it...). No, Twelve, as well as the boys' dads, are just subjects of this society thoroughly managed by the System. Next chapter is in the works, but it might take a week or two to get finished.
1/2/26, 4:24 AM
The combination of hot drone transformation and tragically denied love is intense! Great chapters so far!

1/4/26, 8:42 AM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thank you! Glad you like it!
1/4/26, 8:37 AM
It feels bad… Farrows seems trapped back into an unhappy life :/ The writing is excellent, ur characters sound complex and deep
1/3/26, 1:32 PM
I love the persuasion... and the conflict... and the emotion... and all the references to the man smells and tastes... THANK YOU. WOW
1/3/26, 11:25 AM
Oh my GOD! How could you do this, Soren?!? Making me wait another week to find out what happens? This story is so good and so hot and there's so much CUM! I know it's not up to me, but I really, really hope that Caspian, Chase, and Hunter can get back together again. Ugh! It's so good!!!
1/2/26, 11:49 PM
What the fuck? When did this story became heartbreaking. Ethan and Farrow finding what they needed, a daddy and someone to protect. I was enjoying the two origin stories and their hot controlling of their minds. This better not be the end of Ethan and Charles. I enjoy their chemistry. And i love that we also have a swiss army knife slave. Cant wait for the next week.