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10/26/23, 2:47 PM
I'm glad to see Mason get his turn at being Kol's bitch for the night and really learning that his place is under a man. :wink: This chapter was everything I'd hoped for after the last one and more, especially with Mason becoming personally responsible for some of the deliveries.

10/30/23, 2:23 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Thanks! I enjoyed this arc of Kol's. Just posted a new story for the Halloween theme - zombies!
10/30/23, 1:43 PM
Talk about cold opens, this was a hot open if I ever saw one! The dream was a clever way to give us a taste of intense sex without sacrificing the build-up it deserves. You’ve done a great job with the character dynamics, and the world _almost_ seems like it could be real—except maaaybe for the moment when Apollo ‘comes out’ as a ‘hungry bottom’ to his coach. But gods was it worth it for the moment when Coach Barrett’s tip teases Apollo’s hole. Looking forward to more!
10/29/23, 8:48 PM
The transformation where realy nice...
Anonymous
10/29/23, 1:19 AM
This is so hot!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
10/27/23, 1:23 PM
I liked this story, it was well written and toxic masculinity is an important topic to be talked about. I liked the little episodes of Andrew's childhood, the bit about the toy was my favourite but I could relate to the scraped knee one most. I was a little confused about the constant references to the temperature. Was this an attempt to tie back to the idea of warmth in "warm summer rain" and how it isn't so bad? Also justice for Sergio 🥺

10/27/23, 1:34 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) I just wanted to keep the fact that it is summer in the reader's mind, hence why it was mentioned multiple times. In a medium without visuals, it's a bit tricky to keep certain details alive as the story progresses. Afterall, it is kind of relevant to the ending scene. If it was a cold shower, it would probably be more uncomfortable. But it was specifically supposed to be not a big deal.
10/27/23, 1:53 AM
This was really lovely and intriguing -- I'm wondering, has it not been continued yet, or can I find the continuation elsewhere? I'm always delighted when I stumble upon a new story from you that I somehow missed when I obsessively went through your story list the first time.
10/25/23, 3:16 PM
Ooh thinga are getting interesting. Love the build up for his discovery/acceptance. And i find it interesting how fast his thought of converting his entourage and friends to be a part of his harem. Lol he works fast.
10/24/23, 4:09 PM
I saw the title and I just had to read it. And it turned out to be way hotter than I was expecting. Outstanding work, honestly.

10/25/23, 12:22 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) I can see why! We'll chalk it up to coincidence! :wink: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/24/23, 11:58 PM
Any thoughts on when another chapter might drop? Please!