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Aug 31, 2023
9/2/23, 4:54 PM
I'm a sucker for a romantic possession story and this one is great so far. I hope our officer is treated as well as Ben by whomever continues this tale.

9/2/23, 7:56 PM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) Thank you! I also hope someone treats him well -- there's a lot of potential there!
Aug 31, 2023
Lavender Lad
9/2/23, 5:11 AM
I am sorry but the moment I saw "Ben Shapiro" I couldn't stop reading all his lines in that nasaly voice and my boner died down, really liked the writing though ngl

9/2/23, 7:55 PM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thanks to both you and @Speaks for giving me your reactions. I really appreciate it! And I changed the name.
9/2/23, 5:58 PM
I'm delighted to see you continue this storyline. It's a refreshing take on the genre and full of anticipation and potential. Can't wait to read the next installment.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Hopefully coming sooner than the last part. 😊
9/2/23, 4:56 AM
I'm a sucker for process-focused changes and control, so this was a real delight! I'm so glad I finally had the chance to read it.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Glad you liked it!
9/2/23, 2:32 PM
What an amazing start to a series!
Aug 31, 2023
Speaks
9/1/23, 3:11 PM
You named your protagonist “Ben Shapiro”?

9/1/23, 3:36 PM
@[Speaks](/user/show/964546) _“Well, when the war couldn’t kill him and neither could the Republicans, Mother Nature — that bitch — turned to the only thing that could. Cancer. Three weeks. That’s all it took and his body became a memory.”_ There might be a bit of a political riff in this one, but let me assure you with every honest bone in my body: "The characters are fictional. Any similarity to persons dead or alive is coincidental." :)
Aug 31, 2023
9/1/23, 2:40 PM
You write with an amazing & unique voice. This one really stands out. Excellent work. Bravo!!

9/1/23, 3:30 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thank you! The idea just sprang into my head the other day when I was walking past a "retirement" complex thinking about how cool it would be if somehow thieves were punished for their thieving. Weird combination, right? And then, of course, sex had to have its place... ;)
Aug 31, 2023
8/31/23, 10:14 PM
Very good writing! This would be a good screenplay!

9/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) Thank you! LA is in my blood -- can't seem to get very far from movies!
Aug 31, 2023
8/31/23, 8:24 AM
I hope someone continues it!

9/1/23, 3:23 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) So do I! I really like the concept; there are just too many other ideas I need to get out of my skull. Plus, some of the writers here are so good I'm excited by what they might do!
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9/1/23, 1:15 PM
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