Recent Comments

12/21/25, 4:00 PM
Hello, I have just read the three chapters you posted ... I could comment many things of the story and would probably be able to write a very detailed feedback about it, but I'll try to stick to the main ideas. There was a point a really reconsidered to keep reading and I'm -really- glad I did. I usualy read stories here to, let's be honnest, have a lot of fun. You are the second story I read (and gosh how many I have read), that actually really resonated with me as a person. It's only my opinion, but I really like the depth you managed to achieve with both characters, with so little writing (I mean it's not a 700 pages novel and yet you managed awesomely). Even with this fantasy bracelet idea (very cool by the way), you managed to make the story live in a way I find hard to describe with words. I want to deeply thank you for your work and I wish you never to feel pressured to write or post anything quickly. I hope that in the end, you will keep enjoy writing as much as I enjoyed your stories. Thank you also for the time you took to work on it, there must be a lot of things that, as a reader, I would not even think about, things you went through as a writer. (PS : I apologize if some phrasings sound awkward, french being my first language I still struggle sometimes, especially when I get a bit emotionnal).

12/21/25, 10:44 PM
@[DomslutinBriefs](/user/show/10062287) Hey! That’s just a really awesome thing to hear. I have wondered sometimes whether this story is the kind of thing for folks on this site. But I’m determined to see this story through to the end, and it’s so nice to hear that even just a few people have enjoyed it so far. I hope you can enjoy the upcoming chapters as much xxx
12/21/25, 10:34 PM
I don’t know which series I hope comes out each week. This one or oby, but I’m loving both of them!
Sylranix
12/21/25, 6:05 PM
I missed reading that universe, "Destination Utopia" was the first story I read here, which made me discover the website.

12/21/25, 8:29 PM
@Sylranix Thanks for returning to the universe of Destination: Utopia! :) Thanks to Corin, I was able to get back to being creative - it was a lot of fun collaborating with him on this one. :)
12/18/25, 3:32 PM
I really like Andrew's internal moral struggles with his new power, something I think many of us with these types of fantasies think about. I am a sucker for a complex but overall well-meaning protagonist and that's what I get from Andrew so far. That being said, I am interested in what may happen with his roommate eventually, as well as how he's going to use his touch to corrupt more footballers and such!

12/21/25, 3:30 PM
I’m so glad that Andrew’s moral struggles didn’t come off as lame or unrealistic. Sure, it’s fun to read a hedonistic character, but I firmly believe that when real, regular people gain powers (supernatural or not) they’ll have some kind of internal monologue about the ethics of it all. Can they corrupt themselves? Yeah. But it’s not going to happen overnight Anyway, I truly appreciate your comment, and I hope you like the next chapter, which is coming sooner rather than later.
12/18/25, 1:37 PM
Loving the story mate! Love to see more of the football obsession take hold of Drew!

12/21/25, 3:22 PM
Thanks, man! There’s a lot more coming. I’m anchoring the events to the real-life results of the 24–25 season, and I’ll probably get into the first months of the current one. In the next chapter, a new player from a mancunian team pops up on Drew’s radar.
Phil
12/17/25, 3:23 PM
Wow what an incredible story man. Wondering if he will ever met the guy who “ruined” his wishes. I wish I had the app and could make some changes myself. Grrrr Thanks for sharing and btw it’s extremely well written.

12/21/25, 3:10 PM
Hey, Phil, thank you so much for your comment! I didn't plan for Andrew to meet the guy who 'ruined' his wishes, but he will meet someone involved with the app :grimacing: About wanting the app for yourself, I feel the same, even with the risk it still worth a shot
12/17/25, 5:02 AM
Such a great story! This is building up to an insanely hot series. So many questions still remain... will he make more cursed wishes? Will someone else's cursed wishes impact him unexpectedly? How will Leo become more involved? Can't wait to find out those answers!

12/21/25, 3:07 PM
Thanks for the comment, It's fun to see how each person resonates with a diferente part of the story! Hope that you like what I have in store for these characters
12/21/25, 1:59 PM
I love the past and present being told in each chapter, cant wait for them to merge and find out how ethan is captured. Cant wait how he will deal with Blake, how is Agent Farrow will be incorporated to his harem, and Ethan and Derek better team up and use their powers to add more guys to their harem. Hypnotized and body modified harem.
12/20/25, 9:37 PM
Hell. The initial chapter promised Desiree and the second part don't fall apart. The idea of full Body covering and this nano bot stuff.. very Well written! Please don't Stop this series too soon.

12/21/25, 10:07 AM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Promise, Vince. There's a lot more lewd and emotional stuff to come!
12/21/25, 2:32 AM
It’s interesting how much this part of the story reminds me of another one that also had a system intake and T-drones and such. This one though goes in quite a different direction. I like it. Great series! Though I’m sad that the two main characters don’t get to consciously be together.

12/21/25, 4:31 AM
@[Null0byte](/user/show/210784) You're probably thinking of Destiny Uptopia which is another series ITO-K wrote

12/21/25, 7:07 AM
@[Null0byte](/user/show/210784) Yes, ITO-K's universe has a very recognizable style :) As for the fate of Haru (I should write AN17-2329105) and Souta - well, there are 3 more chapters to come! 2 of them are already written and will get published in 4 resp. 8 days from now. The 5th and last is fully laid out already, and I can hardly wait to write it. I love to dive into the emotions of the protagonists. And ITO-K's universe, even drones have loads of emotions!