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12/14/23, 1:47 PM
I rely hope there going to be a part 2
12/14/23, 11:03 AM
Enjoy the use of a smell post-workout. Some love that effect and smell. Others quickly jump into the shower. No perspirant while wearing a leather jacket with a jeans crotch containing yesterdays jockstrap is very hot.
12/3/23, 12:43 PM
Very hot, cant wait for the next part

12/14/23, 7:12 AM
@[VenomControl](/user/show/538660) Hope the story does you justice.
12/2/23, 6:01 PM
I have come across the view that the narcissist personality is akin to a form of demonic possession - and you describe this very well indeed. As to the question of liberal v conservative views, perhaps Tucker would espouse any cause if he could manipulate people and have his way? It's all means to an end for him/

12/14/23, 7:11 AM
@[Corinthian38](/user/show/38372) Thank you very much for the complement and for the perspective.
Arpágonu
12/3/23, 2:57 PM
The story is following an interesting path, a descent of sorts to the dark side. Maybe a makeover would be interesting, more in the style of a bad boy, in contrast to the normal Johnny. Maybe a tattoo or piercing, although possibly the best thing is to smoke, after all, Johnny is a pillar of good health and lifestyle habits, and perhaps introducing such a bad habit will be a catharsis for the new master of that body. I look forward to the third part

12/14/23, 1:14 AM
@[Arpágonu](/user/show/2723721) Thanks for the comment. I was originally planning on having that be a later change, but decided to move it up in the story because of your comment and like how it turned out.
Arpágonu
12/13/23, 10:07 PM
That fall to the dark and wild side is super sexy. You have left me wanting to see what he does with the car. He certainly seems like a bad boy now. I imagine a camaro style car would suit him, maybe a motorcycle too. I love your way of writing and that you continue to do it consistently. I can't wait for the next part
12/13/23, 12:54 PM
This story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. what was J's issue with D? why didn't the store owner ask them why they were fighting? kind of a strange thing to gloss over.

12/13/23, 8:01 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Hi musclejunky, thanks for the feedback. I know I have to adjust my shot. I was already thinking of explaining some things in chapter 4. I tried to write to you privately to ask for advice, but I can't find you on the forum.
12/13/23, 6:31 PM
Loving the humiliation. Very hot story!
12/13/23, 6:50 AM
Now I soooo wished I had sensitive nipples!… Thanks for this story. So well written, and such a treat for a Talley fan like me! There’s sunshine and strength in that glorious summer of love. And that’s a brilliant streak of hope. Lots of pillowy hugs to you!

12/13/23, 2:01 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) You and me both! Nipples this sensitive are probably more of a fantasy than a reality, but it was still hot to write about how good they felt for Talley. It’s always great bringing Talley back into the picture. His saga is certainly the longest I’ve written so far, and he has a lot left to go through. I’m looking forward to writing more. Thanks for reading!
12/13/23, 12:50 AM
I came to this site to jerk off, not to cry! In all seriousness, really outstanding job Soren. You've been talking about this vignette for some time and I'm really happy to see it published and out in the open so everyone can read this work. A perfect blend of loss, wanting, and hope, topped with your outstanding detailed sex scenes and depictions of the male body. Very well done, Soren! You should be proud!

12/13/23, 1:26 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I’m glad it’s coming across as I wanted! It’s so great to hear that all this work was worth it and has produced something that can touch someone while deliberately still being smut. Thanks for the read!