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12/19/23, 4:34 PM
I consider this story one of the best written in this place. I've enjoyed every word. Thanks
12/18/23, 12:59 PM
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you craft in the finale, any chance you take requests?

12/19/23, 8:50 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Thank you! I am still very new to writing. This is the first story I've ever done, so I am not in a place where I can take a request to write a story. However, feel free to let me know what you wanted and I'll see if I can somehow incorporate it into a story in the future. If that's something you'd like.
12/17/23, 6:15 PM
Hope more is to come.
12/13/23, 10:20 PM
What an unexpected semi-tribute! And a very good one, at that. You really nailed the mix of character development, melancholy, and horniness, and tied in Talley’s sexuality with his hang-ups wonderfully. I especially admire your blending of time periods right in the middle of paragraphs just by the simple mechanic of italics. Incredibly immersive. I internally gasped in literary-nerd appreciation at its first appearance. Very, very nicely done!

12/17/23, 8:28 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) I’m glad you enjoyed it so! I did my best to blend the emotion and the smut but I wasn’t going to truly know until I let a variety of readers check it out. I’m pleased that it worked for you. And I had a lot of fun with the italics sections! I felt like they came very naturally in the instances where they showed up here, though as always they still needed some work. But I’m very happy with it now.
12/16/23, 1:44 PM
Damn, really love it how Tucker manipulate Johnny

12/16/23, 6:25 PM
@[Madh](/user/show/10036821) Thank you. I hope the story continues to serve you well.
12/16/23, 2:05 PM
Love it so much, can't wait for next chapter
12/16/23, 1:18 PM
Damn this is really good, finally found the awesome possession story, really love every detail on your story, this is what I'm looking for
12/13/23, 7:17 AM
Incredibly poignant. You can really feel the depth of Talley's emotions here. It shows how special this/these relationships were to him, and how difficult it was to leave them behind. It almost makes you question the old saying "It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all." Because the sadness you feel from Talley is heartbreaking. Of course, it could all be better if Riki and Mads show up for Talley in the future sometime. The sex scenes are incredibly vivid too, and it makes me want to go read the stories with Talley, Riki, and Mads that just focus on the fun sexy times. Also, as a top who is sometimes submissive, we should normalize Dom bottoms. I hope Talley can have some holesome happy experiences as one in the near future.

12/16/23, 6:32 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I’m glad that the feeling of loss came through in full. My first draft of this story had some hollowness behind it, and I don’t think it would have been nearly as good if time.to.occur hadn’t pointed out how much I still needed to do to achieve a natural, realistic depiction of Talley’s emotional state and experience of loss. And I have to thank you, too, for helping me add even more. Honestly, it would have been so cute and romantic if they _did_ show up right at the end. But I’ve already deceived the readers enough with such a seemingly happy ending that I don’t want to give even more false hope, heh. I do want to bring them around sooner or later, though. Talley needs them; that much is obvious.
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12/15/23, 10:26 PM
Please continue this