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Anonymous
11/22/25, 8:32 AM
Loved this it was both hot and funny
Anonymous
11/21/25, 5:32 PM
Hilarious! 🤣
supaboivsvillain
11/19/25, 8:58 PM
Congrats, Lucas-- this story/series is becoming my FAVORITE of 2025!:fireworks: Every chapter is riveting and I'm especially enjoying these latest chapters, 'Sticky' & 'Reset'!! If I had grown up with a character like Noah in my life, I would be a completely different person today.... (and I'm not sure if that's a good or a bad thing!) LMAO...:fire: The way you skillfully peel the layers of Liam's submission back chapter-by-chapter....it's quite GENIUS! Looking forward 2 the next chapters!! BRAVO & THANK YOU!!!:firecracker:

11/21/25, 5:12 PM
@supaboivsvillain dude thank u sm, im blushing over here lmao. glad youre into it my man
11/21/25, 8:17 AM
Masterfully written. Strong and sexy domineering and hopeless surrender. Thanks. 🔥🔥🔥

11/21/25, 5:11 PM
@[Toto27](/user/show/10051657) my pleasure man
11/14/25, 3:03 PM
Hope there is more.

11/15/25, 2:19 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Part 2 " The Breaking " is coming in 16th November !

11/20/25, 12:26 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) A good story with great potential. I'd like to know more about how the other studio members ended up there and began working with the director? Especially about the big Russian? Was he lured in like Drew? Or were other methods used? I'd like to know more about how you'll develop the other studio characters and how they ended up in the story.

11/21/25, 4:28 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) oh no in my mind Russian is a sadistic asshole who enjoys what he is doing . he is getting paid . maybe he run from Russia because he is gay and a shitty person so got trouble in Russia so when he got job offer from director . living in America , breaking straight american marines and get paid for it . of course he liked the idea . we will see him again in story but don't know what I am going to do with him yet . about the other characters , hmmm chapter 4 will be about ramirez and o'malley's back story . I want to bring more characters in , some characters will develop every well while others will be side characters . I don't think I will focus on director body guards .
11/17/25, 5:57 PM
Enjoying every chapter. I always enjoy reading about muscle chunks getting owned. Though if you are interested in furthering their submission and humiliation, how about getting rid of all their body hair and using chastity cages? It's not like they will be using those anymore.

11/21/25, 4:22 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) never played with those ideas , I might try it :D
Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:02 PM
i have to be honest here. i was dissapointed with this continuation. when you go back and read pollination, not only was it hot & sexy but it showed a community being built & brought together. it seemed that more and more chapters had branching out characters that brought more and more men into the fold. now, not only do we lack the sex and seeing more and more guys being brought into the fold, but we are actively watching that community being torn apart. i felt that the fun was completley sucked out, and replaced with ??? i don't even know what it was replaced with. does the writer hate his own series? it felt like there was an actual hatred for the alien symbionts. go back to the earlier chapters. the men loved their symbionts. there was a bonding not only with the alien, but with the other men. and now it's all gone.

11/20/25, 11:12 PM
@Anonymous There's a lot to address here -- wish me luck. I make no secret of the fact that I wish I'd never written POLLINATION: the SERIES in the first place. I'm not judging the quality of the work, but I wish I'd left the original story on its own like I'd always intended. In P:TS, the mistake I made was in trying to elevate the threat so as not to become a redundant "And Then The Same Thing Happened To Bob" kind of story. I created what I consider to be the greatest blunder of the whole thing: the Great Ones. I believe the intrusion of the Great Ones killed what I was originally trying to do with the plot and forced me to take the story in a different direction -- looking back on it now, I wish I'd never done that. Part of my motivation in Season Two and Three was to get back to my original conceit. That said, I've had the uber-plot written in my head since Season One -- I've hinted at it from time to time in different ways -- but I always expected Season Three to end where it did, The conflict in the current book has been in the process since Season One, as a matter of fact. Ironically, I really enjoyed writing Season Three and I'm excited to pick it up again where I've left it because I'm going to be able to do what I wanted to do with it in the first place. I have a Season Four in mind (and Five!), but I had to clear the detritus. I'm sorry you didn't like it -- I really truly am -- but understand that I love these characters enough to do horrible things to them. And I went WAY over my initial word count because I was enjoying myself so much. There it is -- you can't go home again.

Anonymous
11/21/25, 3:57 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) i can understand and respect everything you said. it just felt like season 3 was such a drastic change from everything that came before. so to me, it sounds like it's not so much a tearing down of what you have built, but a "course-correction"? okay. I can roll with that. because i always felt season 1 was always the best. so if you're trying course-correct back to those ideas or away from the great ones, I would have to agree that this could be a good thing. it was just so hard for me to stomach page after page of men hating their symbionts. I guess when I first read pollination, as a reader, i fantasized having one slide down into my balls. and I imagine every other reader wanted the same thing. and then you gave us season 3 in which you seemed to say no no no, that's bad. it was such a whiplashing u-turn from what I had so love to read.

11/21/25, 1:00 PM
@Anonymous Once the aliens revealed themselves to be the bad guys in Season 2, it stopped being such a party. Suddenly, the men found themselves enslaved to the Great Ones and they were terribly abused at the Kansas Farm, endlessly planting their seed. So I think you're right in Season One being a lighter tone and men more excited about their transformations, but I think Season Two turned that page. Also bear in mind that the entirety of Season Three is just a little over 24 hours. I've kept the characters I like and if you've read me before, you know nobody ever dies forever. I think "reset" is an excellent way to think about it, but there was a lot of shit to get through.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
11/20/25, 7:58 PM
Your skill of world building, when the focus is just two characters is crazy good. We have slang like “the howl” and literature that exists, which makes everything feel more alive. Awesome story.
11/20/25, 1:22 PM
Tomorrow will tell a tale

11/20/25, 2:20 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Surely everything will be alright in the morning after a good night’s sleep…