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3/11/24, 11:25 PM
Looking forward to part 3.
Anonymous
3/11/24, 8:24 PM
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter ....🥰🥰
3/9/24, 7:10 PM
Yes, it is a great story. I hope there is more to come.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[Mailman2020!](/user/show/938360) Just posted Chapter 5
3/9/24, 3:06 PM
This story is so cute and hot. I hope it never ends.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) It was written with five chapters in mind, but Wart and Thwollow haven't fully relinquished me yet, so we'll see.
Anonymous
3/11/24, 3:45 AM
this was soooooo hot omg
3/11/24, 1:20 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! I owe a lot to the old NCMC. I do still have plans to do finish this when I have more time and I'm less depressed.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 3:49 PM
There are some important content tags that you should include given the nature of your story. Also, the word choices you made were distracting. There were a few places where your overly verbose descriptions focused too much on showing off a broad vocabulary and less on explaining what was actually happening.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 3:29 PM
Ain't it romantic? Being kidnapped by a guy who would sacrifice everything to save you? Hopefully Josh and Daniel can sort out all their repressed feelings and just kiss each other before this messy situation gets even messier. As for Matt... Good luck, lmfao! Imagine finally realizing how much of a dick you were to someone who genuinely loves you and then finding your home looking like a bomb just dropped. I'm praying that Luke is fine.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 2:12 PM
Good god, Matt can be such an asshole. If anything, Jared should fuck and slap Matt like that. He deserves it.
Male-meat-suit
3/10/24, 10:42 AM
yes