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1/4/26, 3:56 PM
That last part. Ooph. Kinda was expecting betrayal, but a deal is a deal. Ah well.
1/2/26, 5:43 PM
Nah, I don't believe in coincidences. First Hayato, then Haru, and then Souta. The System is watching them and used their relationships to lure them into it one by one. And Twelve's previous life was likely related to Souta. Could Twelve be Souta's dad but nanobots altered his appearance, making him younger and unrecognizable? The fact that Souta instinctively called out "Dad" was quite intriguing. Perhaps the system will eventually reunite all the family members, including Haru's father? Can't wait to see the next chapter!

1/4/26, 8:48 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Well, the System doesn't think of itself as being insidious. It only has the best interests of the people in its custody in 'mind' - and humanity in general. If human beings would agree with this, had they any say, is a very different question, though :) Twelve is not Souta's dad (now THAT would be insidious, wouldn't it...). No, Twelve, as well as the boys' dads, are just subjects of this society thoroughly managed by the System. Next chapter is in the works, but it might take a week or two to get finished.
1/2/26, 4:24 AM
The combination of hot drone transformation and tragically denied love is intense! Great chapters so far!

1/4/26, 8:42 AM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thank you! Glad you like it!
1/4/26, 8:37 AM
It feels bad… Farrows seems trapped back into an unhappy life :/ The writing is excellent, ur characters sound complex and deep
12/23/25, 12:40 AM
I quite enjoy this story even though im not a football fan. Love that Andrew still have his humanity and he still doubt in using his new powers. I cant wait to read where he would use his magic touch more. I hope he mind control more (straight) guys into having gay sex with him, athlete or rich or regular guys.

1/3/26, 6:50 PM
Hey, sorry for leaving you on read for so long. Thank you for your comment. In the next chapter, Andrew is a little bit more selfish and has less doubt about using his power, but there is also a new sense of novelty to it. Hope you like it
1/3/26, 1:32 PM
I love the persuasion... and the conflict... and the emotion... and all the references to the man smells and tastes... THANK YOU. WOW
1/2/26, 11:49 PM
What the fuck? When did this story became heartbreaking. Ethan and Farrow finding what they needed, a daddy and someone to protect. I was enjoying the two origin stories and their hot controlling of their minds. This better not be the end of Ethan and Charles. I enjoy their chemistry. And i love that we also have a swiss army knife slave. Cant wait for the next week.
1/2/26, 3:45 AM
The longer this tale continues the more it becomes like a greek tragedy; star crossed lovers separated then reunited through unlikely circumstances, only to be torn apart again. This chapter took a much more obvertly dark tone compared to those previous as well, very much playing into the utopia/dystopia themes. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what you have in store for our central pair and the peppering of other characters now in their orbit as this grand narrative concludes.

1/2/26, 6:26 PM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Thank you, Phillip! I truly love your comment; it means that we did something right!
1/2/26, 6:23 PM
Excellent writing as always!
1/2/26, 3:36 AM
So this is what hayato has been up to. He seems content bit it's slightly eerie knowing that he doesn't care much to see his family again. Still, perhaps the system gave him a reason he accepted for this. He did show pity to Souta as well by not implementing the full extent of what the system wanted. Which is interesting...wonder what that might cause. Something tells me this isn't the end for souta or haru.. will they meet up with each other as drones? And what of souta's father? Surely he may revisit the idea he dismissed as a conspiracy? It's tragic that souta felt so angry and afraid but I can see why. But is he completely gone now?

1/2/26, 6:19 PM
@[Anon-966](/user/show/10049352) We're delighted that you're so engaged in the story. This is a major motivation! So thank you for that! Hayato is not entirely himself any longer - the System has changed him. He is aware, and he does care for his old family to a degree - but the System is now his family. But more importantly, he doesn't see Heru's fate as something negative. He actually envies him because, in his eyes, being an AN-Drone is the pinnacle of existence. Stay tuned to learn if this is going to stay like this, and what's going to happen to the boys and their parents... :)