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1/4/26, 11:08 PM
We're so back
1/4/26, 10:10 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/4/26, 7:59 PM
I love this story.
1/4/26, 7:55 PM
Hot second part. Looking forward to more.
d-boi
1/4/26, 7:23 PM
How tragic. This unit felt it was a given that Souta would be forced into the System as early as chapter 1. Even so, it was surprised it happened so soon. It hopes that the two may in some way reunite.
1/4/26, 3:56 PM
That last part. Ooph. Kinda was expecting betrayal, but a deal is a deal. Ah well.
1/2/26, 5:43 PM
Nah, I don't believe in coincidences. First Hayato, then Haru, and then Souta. The System is watching them and used their relationships to lure them into it one by one. And Twelve's previous life was likely related to Souta. Could Twelve be Souta's dad but nanobots altered his appearance, making him younger and unrecognizable? The fact that Souta instinctively called out "Dad" was quite intriguing. Perhaps the system will eventually reunite all the family members, including Haru's father? Can't wait to see the next chapter!

1/4/26, 8:48 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Well, the System doesn't think of itself as being insidious. It only has the best interests of the people in its custody in 'mind' - and humanity in general. If human beings would agree with this, had they any say, is a very different question, though :) Twelve is not Souta's dad (now THAT would be insidious, wouldn't it...). No, Twelve, as well as the boys' dads, are just subjects of this society thoroughly managed by the System. Next chapter is in the works, but it might take a week or two to get finished.
1/2/26, 4:24 AM
The combination of hot drone transformation and tragically denied love is intense! Great chapters so far!

1/4/26, 8:42 AM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thank you! Glad you like it!
1/4/26, 8:37 AM
It feels bad… Farrows seems trapped back into an unhappy life :/ The writing is excellent, ur characters sound complex and deep
12/23/25, 12:40 AM
I quite enjoy this story even though im not a football fan. Love that Andrew still have his humanity and he still doubt in using his new powers. I cant wait to read where he would use his magic touch more. I hope he mind control more (straight) guys into having gay sex with him, athlete or rich or regular guys.

1/3/26, 6:50 PM
Hey, sorry for leaving you on read for so long. Thank you for your comment. In the next chapter, Andrew is a little bit more selfish and has less doubt about using his power, but there is also a new sense of novelty to it. Hope you like it