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4/11/24, 3:28 PM
Well, I hadn’t considered a “Door #3” option. But I guess it’s up to what’s behind #1 & #2. Lol. Can’t wait.
Anonymous
4/11/24, 2:22 PM
I wrote a longer comment that got eaten by the void so all I'm going to say is Holy fuck. Both endings please, and a third secret ending you havent even hinted at, please and thank you
eagerboy415
4/11/24, 1:55 PM
Team mistakes here. One final pitfall Brad can’t escape
Anonymous
4/11/24, 7:03 AM
I love this story! Very well-written, and loved that we got to delve more into the lore of magic in this reality. Im definitely glad brad came out on top, but would loved to have seen drake messing with brad more (making him unable to think about other things and even more physical transformations in order to show the boundaries of the power and extent to which drake had over brad...like, definitely want to see the big-titted barbie and straight versions of brad/kal come out, as well as others).
4/11/24, 4:15 AM
I just woke up so forgive me for the dumb humor, but it could be funny if "mistakes" refer to us, the readers. Like we'll receive a very short nonsensical paragraph, in a CYOA Goosebumps style. In more seriousness, I think it would be cool if you use the diverging plot tool and let us see both options. Only if you have the time/will for that of course.
4/11/24, 12:54 AM
Excuse the repeat of words, but the choices are ambiguous haha. Mistakes are just choices with regrets of some form in hindsight. I guess based on the story this far, mistakes (whether just regretting not to see Ethan, or casting a curse on another warlock, or something untold and even more chaotic 😈) sounds like a more reasonable conclusion than choices, which would imply a happy ending, especially when compared to the other option. I'd personally love to see what it was like from Kals perspective at the start. Loosing his otherwise reality controlling powers and becoming a toxic alpha, slave to his own dick, not that he'd see it that way 😂

4/11/24, 2:17 AM
@[Rapids](/user/show/1149812) I did consider a spin-off chapter from Kal’s PoV, but it would be outside of the main story, and likely include more straight sex than I want to write. I might write that interlude eventually, but one thing I like is how defined a character Kal is by his absence. In the first 7 chapters, Kal is in 2 of them, but his choices and mistakes (hah) and natural inclinations towards man-sex are more important to the story than any other character other than Brad, and I think it’s a toss up as to if Kal or Brad are more important.
4/11/24, 12:19 AM
This series has been an absolute delight to read. Every new chapter just adds more buildup towards the end and they make me grow more excited to see the ~~depraved~~ ending. I'm actually one of the few who likes Drake's mind tricks. I hope Brad picks up one or two from him :p
4/10/24, 8:48 PM
Wow, wow, wow. How to choose? And you could argue that either choices or mistakes can yield good or bad endings. Choose poorly and disaster can result. But we can learn from our mistakes and be better than before. So which is correct?

4/10/24, 9:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I would add that no one intends to make mistakes, but how do you know which of your choices is a mistake? And if your 'mistake' helps you learn or if it makes you a better man, was it a mistake at all? They are two sides of the same coin, right?

4/10/24, 10:01 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) exactly. But the fact that this chapter ends with Brad needing Ethan gives me hope that regardless his ‘choice’, the ending will be positive.
4/10/24, 7:48 PM
I was so worried for a second that the bad ending would involve Drake, because tbh, im hating his character. So now im curious how would the story diverge. Im still on team Throuple btw. Edit: im impressed that he learned a lesson from his mistake. In that it will have an impact oh his decision/story ending. Team jock Brad being with his Daddy and Bro.

4/10/24, 9:42 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Well, Drake is very easy to hate. I think I hate him too. He may still have a role to play, however.
4/10/24, 9:40 PM
This just gets better and better! Can’t wait for the next chapter!