Recent Comments

1/1/26, 7:55 PM
This is an amazing story, the most intense and realistic dronification story I've ever read. A deep insight into the dronespace, yet untainted by the usual over-the-top fantastic settings.

1/1/26, 7:57 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) One criticism I'd like to add though: Please add more paragraphs. They make reading so much easier. Usually with every new thought, every new event and each time another person starts to speak, you also start a new paragraph.

1/11/26, 12:21 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Hey, thanks for the great feedback! This is my first post here, and I'm still learning the system a bit.

1/11/26, 2:30 PM
@[Pup_geo](/user/show/10069516) If you allow, I will reformat the second chapter myself. It's almost unreadable in this state. Or you try it yourself. Remember, to start a new paragraph you need to add an empty line between the two paragraphs.
Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:24 AM
Damn what a chapter. Why do i want Agent Tony to be part of his "family" aswell. Maybe he could be a below or slave by Farrow and then Farrow would be back. And wow, that gym scene is so hot. I wonder who snitched about the giant orgy. Maybe a passerby or late student/audience saw whats happening and freaked out. And so Ethan does bottom. So maybe a shapeshifted Derek or Farrow would top him that would be hot. And for his family, and the implications of them being released from his manipulation, i wonder what would happen if Ethan escapes. Hmm.
1/10/26, 11:06 PM
Great and well-written story, thank you. Hot too. As a submissive myself who has experimented with chastity cages I could relate to it. Look forward to future chapters.
1/10/26, 3:31 PM
With scenes as hot as this, I'm missing Oby chapters a lot less.
1/10/26, 2:23 AM
I loved the perspective switches in this, just damn good writing.
1/10/26, 1:31 AM
Oh wow... I wasn't expecting an actual novel sort of story here with depth. This was a pleasant surprise and enjoyable.
1/9/26, 11:29 PM
I hope his agent heartthrob is alright!
1/9/26, 2:19 PM
😏 Hoping these chapters keep on coming!

1/9/26, 11:16 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I reckon I got a couple more left in me :kissing_heart:
1/9/26, 12:39 PM
Pepperoni