Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:19 PM
The level of detail and immersion was intense at the start but it’s so perfect as a way of “journaling”. Really really enjoyed this start to the story. Definitely interested to read the horny way they physically changed but if that’s planned for far into the future that’s also fine, I really enjoyed your writing style and keen to see more!
7/4/25, 1:54 AM
I've had this series bookmarked for ages and it's a crime that I didn't read it sooner, this was SO good!! I really loved the worldbuilding and this checked a lot of my boxes. I'm excited to read the rest of the series!

7/4/25, 9:11 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Oh great! Well you know what they say, better late than never!
7/4/25, 5:26 PM
Hot story Bro

7/4/25, 5:34 PM
@[Chav lad](/user/show/2652549) thanks brother
7/4/25, 11:42 AM
What a fun start! This kind of Drama is right up my alley. Can't wait to see what happens next!
7/4/25, 4:15 AM
Incredible. Hit all my notes. Jealous of Willy lol.

7/4/25, 7:22 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks!! I’m a huge fan of your work so that means a lot. Hehehe Willy is definitely living his best life. ♥️
Grieyson
7/4/25, 6:21 AM
I, too, hope we get a new chapter soon. Father/son corruption is 🔥
7/1/25, 3:42 AM
I stumbled across this tonight and as some of the other commenters have mentioned, I wanted to sing the praises of this story. It was raw, it was magical, it was full of fear, and trying and hoping that you'd find your place. This story is magnificent and it left an impact

7/4/25, 12:00 AM
@[Knighte](/user/show/10018571) Thanks for the kind words!
7/3/25, 7:10 PM
Maximus's Father is human garbage. A very real-life example (clearly exaggerated) of how many people are treated when they are different. I understand what you're trying to do here.

7/3/25, 7:40 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) After seeing your comment last chapter, I _was_ wondering how you might feel once we actually met him. Certainly no contender for father of the year!

7/3/25, 11:03 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Yes, I am going for something akin to how kids were and still are treated by parents when they might not exactly follow the exact ideals they do. I've sadly seen it more than once. Thankfully, this is exaggerated, but still something like this used to occur...
7/3/25, 7:47 PM
More little glimpses of Maximus breaking through! Colby is medicine for the soul :3 Good work!

7/3/25, 11:02 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) The best part of wakin' up might be a little Colby in your cup!
7/3/25, 10:32 PM
Very immersive and intriguing story so far. Reads well. Dialogue and inner thoughts line up with the thinking patterns of a late teens male. I'm curious how the three friends got changed before the story begins. Definitely wanting to learn more in future chapters.