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7/7/25, 1:18 PM
Fuck yeah bro. It was about time they kissed. If you enjoy musk, I have a dirty story coming up really soon.
7/7/25, 1:06 PM
i have been WAITING for them to kiss. I love the tastes and the description of the taste ... sweet. I was inhaling deeply while I read about it... cuz I also love to read about the smells of men while intimate. SO GOOD
7/7/25, 6:19 AM
What an interesting premise, can't wait to read how it all develops!
7/7/25, 3:24 AM
so hot! love all the teasing this chapter. excited to see where this goes
7/6/25, 9:26 PM
Poor Bill. I hope a few good doses of Sean's cum will be enough to reverse what they've done to him. Thanks for another chapter!
7/6/25, 8:57 PM
Nice! I just hope that some unscrupulous neighbor/ex-con/cop doesn't take advantage of the cop in the future (evil grin)!
7/6/25, 6:40 PM
I've been enjoying your story, however, if I were to name one criticism it would be the overt religiosity in this chapter. Maybe other readers have a different take on it, but that is a turn-off for me. That's just my feelings on it and is not meant to detract from your otherwise excellent and creative story.
7/6/25, 10:25 AM
Aside from everything else, I have to say I rather love the use of footnotes!
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7/4/25, 9:19 PM
The level of detail and immersion was intense at the start but it’s so perfect as a way of “journaling”. Really really enjoyed this start to the story. Definitely interested to read the horny way they physically changed but if that’s planned for far into the future that’s also fine, I really enjoyed your writing style and keen to see more!
7/4/25, 1:54 AM
I've had this series bookmarked for ages and it's a crime that I didn't read it sooner, this was SO good!! I really loved the worldbuilding and this checked a lot of my boxes. I'm excited to read the rest of the series!

7/4/25, 9:11 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Oh great! Well you know what they say, better late than never!