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1/15/26, 1:54 AM
Confess Sobriety
1/5/26, 10:59 PM
Another great chapter, Soren! You've done a really good job balancing both the sexual aspects as well as the emotional and relationship aspects. I concur with Jack, hoping that Caspian/Chase/Hunter can have their happy ending!

1/14/26, 7:29 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, sometimes I worry about whiplash, but I think it's worth it to give Hawk a moment of weakness while he's fucking Chase with dangerously addictive precum, for example--I think that momentary dimuendo makes the sudden intense roughness hit a lot harder. I left Hunter's anger at Caspian for _after_ he lapped at Caspian's fingers like a good panther, though! Depends on the situation.
1/3/26, 11:25 AM
Oh my GOD! How could you do this, Soren?!? Making me wait another week to find out what happens? This story is so good and so hot and there's so much CUM! I know it's not up to me, but I really, really hope that Caspian, Chase, and Hunter can get back together again. Ugh! It's so good!!!

1/14/26, 7:26 PM
@[Jack Reader](/user/show/915335) I felt the stakes really ramped up in this chapter, lovely to hear that you felt the same way. All the pieces for the hunt are in place, poor Chase is a wreck, Caspian is a wreck, at this point I think Hunter is the only one who's sure of himself and not in a healthy way! Also yeah, you know me, I can't write a story without tons of fucking cum. All that precum for Chase, the way he nuts all over himself and paints his body white, Hunter slam-powerbottoming that poor frat boy for a stomach-bulging load... there's always more cum, lmao.
1/2/26, 12:45 AM
Concurred with Jack, Soren! This chapter was really explicitly sexy and hot, I loved it! Even whilst giving us plenty of eye candy with your models and your descriptions, I appreciate how we're still advancing the Chase/Hunter/Caspian arc. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so I'm hoping everyone ends up in a better place, but you're really good at these kinds of stories so I know you'll have something good in store. Can't wait for..._well, tomorrow!_

1/14/26, 7:19 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, the spiritfucking in this chapter was an absolute blast for me! The obstacle course scene was one I was really anticipating writing--but so was Chase finally getting dick from Caspian. I hope their dynamic was really vibrant in this chapter, sexual wrestling and all. Also happy to hear the descriptions worked well. I can't easily visualise people from their descriptions, so the models are important to me, but I've been honing my description of the characters as well. One big thing I'm trying to figure out lately is how to remind readers of the appearance of the models chapter-by-chapter, especially when there's a long time between them, but it sometimes feels repetitive. I think the model images help a lot!
1/14/26, 2:41 AM
Soren, this was an exceptional chapter! I can see all the pieces coming together, and I'm still really hoping for the best for Caspian/Chase/Hunter, especially now that Caspian himself is beginning to realize his own treatment of the frat bottoms and their role. Characterization and story was well-done, as well as managing to get in those steamy moments. Well done - as always! (Plus, it was totally a treat to see Sable and River again! 😉)
1/12/26, 6:01 PM
Brilliant writing! Such an amazing storyline. Thank you for all the work you’ve put into it

1/14/26, 12:49 AM
@[Patrick3](/user/show/10059155) And thank you again for being the audience for this series!
1/12/26, 4:46 PM
I look forward to reading more but thank you so much for this chapter! It was a very satisfying wrap up of all the previous chapters. The slow steady build up of Justin's and Alex's characters really made me feel invested in them. I look forward to seeing how they continue and how Justin can continue to help Alex grow.

1/14/26, 12:49 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) Thank you! This was really the "lore-dump" chapter, but I did my best to keep it lively and interesting. All the writing on this series is done, and the concluding chapters have been scheduled for publication. Next Monday is when the longest and (ahem) meatiest chapter in the series goes up. The following Monday will have a short epilogue.
1/4/26, 4:23 PM
Okay that was a hot switch up. Even tho he has the power, he let Ruben control the situation. Now im thinking there should be a threesome in the near future. He could be sandwhich between declan and ruben, him fucking and being fucked. We could also include Leo to make it a foursome. Hell an orgy of players.

1/13/26, 1:04 AM
I like how your mind works lol Ruben for me has such a dom vibes that I had to find this way to explore his potential Thanks again for your comment
1/12/26, 5:21 PM
Very nice! There’s something about the integration of romantic motivations in a rubber drone story that’s so unexpected and compelling. And the tiny sparks of individuality that persist while still maintaining compliance are fascinating. Y’all are doing a great job with the narrative while keeping it hot and sexy. I love it.

1/12/26, 9:34 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Thank you! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I hope you'll like the final chapter as well!
1/12/26, 3:14 PM
what a GREAT story. I am enjoying so completely!