I like how you write the complex rules of the wishes created from your characters and quite fascinating tbh...

This was fantastic! I absolutely adore stories that are not only about transformation and awareness and ethics, but also just… have this kind of boyishly sweet and refreshing adoration in them without any manipulation needed. What a perfect and hot love story!

I loved this! You commented this was different from you usual stuff, but I'll have to check your stuff once the writers are revealed, because this is awesome!!!!

I may be commenting very late but I have to say that Noah and Joe are my favorite pairing in this story. The Brian plotline may be the most "calling to action" (for a lack of a better word) since Brian is a despicable man child, but the best sex scenes are between Joe and Noah. Their chemistry is great and their dirty talk is both hot and wholesome at the same time. Their scene in the third chapter is one of my favorites and I go back to it many times. It rivals the training dildo scene from What Maketh a Man!

Such a hot and sexy chapter! I love soo many moments of it.

_**YES**_ (Does this being marked as a series mean you're planning to do another? :crossed_fingers:)

This was absolutely adorable.

This was fun!

I really like this episode too. Joe and Noah are the middle of the spectrum for our couples, Tyler/Javi on side and Brian/Riley on the other. Love that they are a very healthy couple and do consent but still have fun corrupting/turning guys bi, and also being considerate for the women on that club. Also i adored Tyler giving Javi and human experience. I hope this 4 people/non people wont face problem that Brian will cause. That dude better fuck himself.

...OK, this is AMAZING. I don't know why this comment section is relatively sparse (I think it's because the majority of us are primarily invested in the Brian/Riley storyline), but this chapter isn't just brilliantly written--it's a fantastic meditation on positive sexuality, ethical multiple partners, and consent. The discussion of whether or not the wishes would be turning men gay against their will is particularly poignant, as it doesn't necessarily answer the question so much as provide the readers an opportunity to decide for themselves. I also can't believe it--this is the best integration of female characters I've ever seen on this site. Only a few authors have touched the subject of women falling under spells/hypnosis, and to be honest, I've never really liked how it's done--the site is supposed to be about gay guys, and reading about straight sex is no fun for me. But having the women who witness Noah and Joe have sex become more into watching their boyfriends make out with other guys--now THAT is genius! It keeps the focus on male/male stuff but still allows the women to be affected by the change in a relatively healthy way. Well done! I also have to shout out the scene where Joe and Noah declare their love for each other. In so many stories--and, by admission, my own head for many years--love and sex are separated; the idea of saying "I love you" during sex is "wrong" somehow, because love is supposed to be a pure, "good" emotion and sex is primal and "bad." But this scene genuinely made me overwhelmed with happiness--and it was still incredibly sexy, too. You hit the perfect balance of the two ideas, and they enrich each other. Just plain amazing. And finally, the scenes of Javi eating--and especially the brackets you use to indicate his emotions--brought me back to when I was a teenager reading "Animorphs" books, and specifically when Ax would eat food and communicate how delicious it was. That gave me a warm fuzzy nostalgia feeling--just another one of the powerful emotions this story is creating. You're a truly phenomenal author, @Naedre, and I can't wait to see what happens next!