As readers, it's rare we're treated to something so sophisticated and well-written. A lot of times, multi-part stories aren't really thought out in terms of story arcs and character development. As I've said a million times before, it's usually "Then the same thing happens to Bob" for however many chapters keeps the author's attention. Rock Creek Werewolf -- who I know as a friend and biking companion (and who fills out his spandex well) -- you have done the nearly impossible: you've made me like werewolves. Well done -- I'M PROUD OF YOU. You should seriously consider publishing this via amazon.

I hope you’ll continue this story or give it an ending. One of the most amazing stories I’ve ever read here!

Wildly imaginative, I continue to be in awe of your creativity. The world building you do is always so impressive.

Love this wished it had more wedgies

This is one amazing story.

You mentioned that the question regarding Sebastian and Taylor being sweet or devilish was the question, and here it is both. Sebastian and Ethan's interactions show that Sebastian genuingly doesn't want to force anybody into their harem, and clearly cares for Ethan greatly due to their shared history with each other, and even though it's a bit dubious that Ethan doesn't entirely have his free will anymore, he did lay everything out for Ethan and give him the choice to even leave if he wanted to, and his intent was to help Ethan first and foremost in all of this. Ethan's situation at this point was a not so good one, and it's clear Sebastian did want to help him. Taylor is a bit more dubious with his literal rewiring of James' personality and kind of mentally breaking him, but he did make a point that James kind of was espousing some less than ideal attitudes. On the other hand, literally stripping him of any confidence (even if it also got rid of the arrogance), is a bit dubious, though I'm sure he will eventually get that back though in a less arrogant manner. Alan definitely seems to be moving forward and finding something new now (and frankly, I don't think he and James were going to last long anyway), and Taylor was able to help him find confidence in himself despite being a bottom which is good. As per their discussion with Dez, it's also clear they aren't in this to simply toy with people either or just go nuts in a hedonistic spiral. They want genuine connection in the harem they are building. Even though there is that dubious aspect of surrendering one's choice to Sebastian or Taylor, both of them clearly leave the choice up to the individual they scout out- they do not force it. And frankly most of the people they are scouting seem to have not been struggling or being overwhelmed by needing to choose on difficult things- so Sebastian and Taylor's offer likely seems a mercy in light of that. It will be interesting to see how they manage to work their way through hell. Dez is a useful asset for that, but they do need to nab a lord somehow...and the question there is how are they going to manage and hoodwink and seduce a lord into being with them considering they are likely centuries older and more experienced with the political subterfuge of the demon realm? They'll manage somehow I'm sure, but they'd need to be very clever about it.

Hot stuff can't wait to see what happens next!!

Thanks for the chapter!!

Almost wish we fully finish seeing what james is reduced to, just so the bad guy gets whats coming, but I'm assuming like Taylor, you are much more interested in Alan. If this writing style (of seeing Seb and Taylor per chapter) continues, it's like getting two chapters for the price of one <3

I love Seb and Te’lor’s relationship honestly, it’s so sweet it almost makes me nauseous XD but in a good way, like too much Halloween candy :3