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12/5/24, 10:24 PM
Really excited about this series. Seb’s section here is really hot; I usually prefer the controlled POV and this was a really sexy example of it. The world you’re building is fun and I love the well-intentioned edge to the reprogramming here. I did feel like Taylor’s section felt a little more rushed and the characters felt a little less human for it. It wasn’t until Alan called him out on doing something to them that I started to take him seriously as a character. I love smut and I don’t need a slow burn, but I think it’s a lot sexier when the controlled go through a couple stages of surrender and we take the time to watch their personality acclimate to each stage. Anyway, Ethan was an awesome addition and I love where this is going overall. Thanks for posting!
12/5/24, 2:53 PM
Can’t wait for them to see the new versions of each other

12/5/24, 7:16 PM
@[M. B. Gaspar](/user/show/10027122) yeah ending it here for this chapter, is kind of a tease (does a thumbs up gesture)
12/5/24, 9:04 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I really enjoyed the vine collar, i dont think i've ever seen that before.
12/5/24, 12:05 AM
I'm really loving this bromance.
12/4/24, 4:36 PM
Okay rubber and personality loss aren’t my thing but *fuck* was that primal rut scene hot. I love the tension between Alexander and David, the flirty agency David still has in his submission. Super hot. Excited about the twist, too. Thanks for posting.
12/4/24, 3:51 AM
This might be mistagged, but it's a perfectly fine story and doesn't deserve a shitty comment. I'd love to see it fleshed out more even!
yeah
12/3/24, 6:53 PM
So hot. Would love to see chapter 3
12/1/24, 8:24 PM
PLEASE continue this story or write more in this world! Questions: What does happen when the key is removed? Can others be infected? What does happen when wrecked/disassembled/ other parts replaced? Does replaced parts affect the human condition or form?

12/3/24, 2:34 AM
@[Jakkin Larethian](/user/show/10035525) I have a next chapter in my head. I just need to sit down and do it. Keys removed: Were-car is stuck unconscious, (unable to start themselves) until the keys are returned. Can others be infected: Not that we know of, it seems to be genetic. Wrecked: likely not survive (sorry to be grim). It would take a monumental effort to restore a wrecked or partially wrecked were-car to a condition where they can start themselves again, and even moreso to transform back into human form. Replaced parts: the same magic that transfers their biological organs and body into car parts also works in reverse. Usefully, this means replacing parts in a were-car can actually mend or improve the were-car’s biological health. It’s not unusual for were-cars — who trust their mechanics — to avoid expensive medical bills by getting treated as cars instead of people, then remaining as cars for a few days/weeks/months until their fit enough to TF back. The next chapter I would write goes into some detail about this. Thank you for the comment.

12/3/24, 11:21 AM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I'm a great fan of inanimate TFs, too. A suggestion for a little tweak to the replacement lore..... Replacement parts start out as 'inert' and have to be assimilated, during which time the were-car is unable to resume their human form. Oil changes are quick, since the oil is stirred, circulated and spread thinly on 'live' surfaces, so Moses was able to change back after being driven home. Replacement parts would need more time, perhaps a whole weekend for a wiper blade. So... Eric's tyres have worn down until they are only just street-legal. He has to plan a week's vacation to get them changed, and has a new battery at the same time.

12/3/24, 12:28 PM
@[kb57z](/user/show/1950995) To be honest, you’ve almost perfectly hit the nail on the head. I was being vague because if I do write a part II, it will go into this, but yes. Smaller jobs get assimilated faster. Bigger replacement jobs are akin to a person recovering from surgery; They can only transform once they’re well enough and the replaced parts have been assimilated. Although tires are not a big deal (not a week anyways, maybe 25 minute or an hour); were cars will regrow their tire threading naturally while in human form, and should they be in car form long enough to need a tire change, it’s no more upsetting than a perhaps “slightly uncomfortable” nail clipping, or aggressive foot exfoliation.