Recent Comments

12/6/24, 2:50 AM
I'm really loving this series! Gradual transformations are high effort to write, but so rewarding to read. Great work. I really enjoy how Leon and Edward's transformations parallel each other.

12/6/24, 6:57 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying it! This series has been so much fun to write, and I am hopeful the next few chapters will make the slow burn worth the wait.
12/5/24, 11:08 PM
Keep going. This is great!
12/5/24, 10:24 PM
Really excited about this series. Seb’s section here is really hot; I usually prefer the controlled POV and this was a really sexy example of it. The world you’re building is fun and I love the well-intentioned edge to the reprogramming here. I did feel like Taylor’s section felt a little more rushed and the characters felt a little less human for it. It wasn’t until Alan called him out on doing something to them that I started to take him seriously as a character. I love smut and I don’t need a slow burn, but I think it’s a lot sexier when the controlled go through a couple stages of surrender and we take the time to watch their personality acclimate to each stage. Anyway, Ethan was an awesome addition and I love where this is going overall. Thanks for posting!
12/5/24, 2:53 PM
Can’t wait for them to see the new versions of each other

12/5/24, 7:16 PM
@[M. B. Gaspar](/user/show/10027122) yeah ending it here for this chapter, is kind of a tease (does a thumbs up gesture)
12/5/24, 9:04 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I really enjoyed the vine collar, i dont think i've ever seen that before.
12/5/24, 12:05 AM
I'm really loving this bromance.
12/4/24, 4:36 PM
Okay rubber and personality loss aren’t my thing but *fuck* was that primal rut scene hot. I love the tension between Alexander and David, the flirty agency David still has in his submission. Super hot. Excited about the twist, too. Thanks for posting.
12/4/24, 3:51 AM
This might be mistagged, but it's a perfectly fine story and doesn't deserve a shitty comment. I'd love to see it fleshed out more even!
yeah
12/3/24, 6:53 PM
So hot. Would love to see chapter 3