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Sarge the Literary Critic?

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Series: Sarge's Barbershop

Sarge's Apprentice

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New Guy in Town

August 25, 2025

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#military #barber #metawriting #marine #3rd person #fan fiction

Sarge gets a visitor on his first Saturday of business: a young man who takes an interest in the shop and its owner because of some stories he read. What will come out of the conversation Sarge has with this young man?

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Series: Sarge's Barbershop

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