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10/24/23, 4:09 PM
I saw the title and I just had to read it. And it turned out to be way hotter than I was expecting. Outstanding work, honestly.

10/25/23, 12:22 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) I can see why! We'll chalk it up to coincidence! :wink: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed!
10/24/23, 8:55 AM
So intriguing!
Anonymous
10/23/23, 1:48 AM
This was great!! I’d love to see the next part. When he goes home and pulls his hunky father aside to help him with something upstairs in his room. His mom asks if he’s alright concerned but he just looks down at his daddies fat bulge and his hole twitches excitedly at the knowledge of it being stretched and fucked hard by his father’s fat cock. He leans in to kiss his mom’s cheek as his hand reaches down and grabs his daddies package and grasps it softly. His dad jumps back a little but lets his boys hand stay there
10/21/23, 9:25 PM
Little bro on big bro is one of my favorite pairings and you did one hell of a job with it!!! Looking forward to seeing what’s in store!

10/21/23, 10:08 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Likewise! Big/Little Bro is one of my favorites as well! :wink: Glad you enjoyed it!
10/21/23, 2:35 PM
That was fucking hot! The manhandling scene at the beginning, the erotic atmosphere all over the Gayla, the sexual madness, and of course that hot incestuous fuck—so good. The tension from the potions was fun as hell, too. Good work!

10/21/23, 3:26 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As always Soren, thank you for the kind words. I had a lot of fun with this one, especially in regards to treading the line between the natural and the supernatural. Whether the reader chooses to believe the potion actually had an effect or it was merely a newfound confidence is up to them! :wink: Can't wait to get back to your Frat Boys, looking forward to seeing what's next!
10/21/23, 1:35 AM
This is amazing! Please continue this!
10/20/23, 9:24 PM
Holy heck this story is great. Emotional, hot, and with some interesting twists. Really looking forward to seeing how it plays out!
10/19/23, 7:46 PM
Great story can’t wait for the next chapter
10/19/23, 1:38 PM
Just reread this after more than a year and it's still amazing. I got off around chapter 3 or 4 but had to stay post cum to finish off the story it was that good! You should still be very proud of this. One request though.... Sequal? I wanna know what Bussy is gonna do to those identicle twins... ;)
10/19/23, 1:52 AM
Please continue this! I need to know what happens next!
10/19/23, 12:54 AM
This is so hot!! More please!
10/19/23, 12:41 AM
This was so hot!!! Please make more!
10/18/23, 8:12 PM
Mmmmmm hope there come's more start is damn hot
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.
10/16/23, 8:03 PM
Great start!
10/16/23, 8:21 AM
Good premise curious to see where it goes
Anonymous
10/13/23, 8:27 PM
I really hope you continue this some day! This is one of my all time favorite series!
10/13/23, 8:42 AM
Hot!! I love learning more about this world and its rich history!
10/13/23, 6:35 AM
I'm enjoying the sheer depravity in these chapters. Thanks for posting. The dirty appeal for the characters at the downshifting idea of getting more focused on their cocks and helping others do the same, and to savour the scent of cum and the men around them really sells it.
10/12/23, 1:13 AM
yay! loved the Kol series. Glad to see this here, and will definitely be checking out your e-book.

10/12/23, 2:49 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Glad you love the series! Note that the first two books will be familiar stories, revised, to introduce new readers to the series. Starting with book 3, I'll take back up the Svi storyline, which I started on Nifty but have since expanded into a major arc, with multiple new stories. I also will keep adding free stories here. I am currently inspired to wrap up Potato Fuck...
10/11/23, 2:04 PM
I'm so glad to see more of this. This is one of my favorite gay historical fantasy series I've ever read, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't fantasize about being Kol's slut for the night sometimes. :sweat_smile: I'm not sure if you have any intention of giving him a reappearance, but one of my favorite repeats lays of Kol's is Waylan the Wainwright and I'd love to see more of him in the future. I particularly liked the idea of Kol oiling Waylan's body just to show him off. :hot_face:

10/12/23, 2:39 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Hey, thanks! And, yeah, I love my poor beefy cow, Waylan, too. I'll definitely need to pay him another visit
10/12/23, 3:17 AM
Ooh great and very hot start for the story. Jayson hope to be versed; to fuck and to be fucked. Cant wait to read more from it.
10/11/23, 9:53 PM
Fuck what an amazing chapter, the gooning is so hot!
Ab3
10/11/23, 4:42 PM
Woww that's a nice start.. wishing Jayson getting fucked and begging for a gang bang to get his ass fucked by everyone
10/11/23, 12:37 AM
Ooh this is hot! How very interesting. I hope Jayson becomes a dominant top who loves eating and fucking ass. Hehe Yeah, this is cool! Very sexy.
10/10/23, 4:39 PM
Holy moly, what a great concept! I love how much of a peek this is into a fully developed fantasy, and how it seamlessly blends some fun kinks. Excellent start and I'm looking forward to more!
10/9/23, 5:22 PM
This is a great start. Can't wait.
Anonymous
10/9/23, 4:22 PM
Amazing!
10/9/23, 3:18 PM
I’m digging this new setting for the story; it’s got fun twists and I feel like it has even more fodder for hot dynamics. It’s great to see someone leaning into the casual sex world vibes—nobody cares that Travis stopped working to have sex! I dig it.
Anonymous
10/8/23, 6:23 PM
Should have left perfection alone. This is just awful.

10/8/23, 6:32 PM
@Anonymous Kisses <3<3<3

10/9/23, 2:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, now…Edlam took a risk making a story in someone else’s universe and provided me with my first bit of fan fiction ever, which is something I have wanted ever since I started writing. It might not be your cup of tea, but that doesn’t make it bad. *I* think he’s doing a fabulous job with the characters, even if he takes them in directions I, in my limited way, wouldn’t have thought of. And never forget that LBAH featured a Jolly Green Giant possessed by an angel exploding a can of beans all over the protagonist…the story is a lot of things, but *perfection* might be a bit optimistic. ;)