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10/13/23, 6:35 AM
I'm enjoying the sheer depravity in these chapters. Thanks for posting. The dirty appeal for the characters at the downshifting idea of getting more focused on their cocks and helping others do the same, and to savour the scent of cum and the men around them really sells it.
10/12/23, 1:13 AM
yay! loved the Kol series. Glad to see this here, and will definitely be checking out your e-book.

10/12/23, 2:49 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Glad you love the series! Note that the first two books will be familiar stories, revised, to introduce new readers to the series. Starting with book 3, I'll take back up the Svi storyline, which I started on Nifty but have since expanded into a major arc, with multiple new stories. I also will keep adding free stories here. I am currently inspired to wrap up Potato Fuck...
10/11/23, 2:04 PM
I'm so glad to see more of this. This is one of my favorite gay historical fantasy series I've ever read, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't fantasize about being Kol's slut for the night sometimes. :sweat_smile: I'm not sure if you have any intention of giving him a reappearance, but one of my favorite repeats lays of Kol's is Waylan the Wainwright and I'd love to see more of him in the future. I particularly liked the idea of Kol oiling Waylan's body just to show him off. :hot_face:

10/12/23, 2:39 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Hey, thanks! And, yeah, I love my poor beefy cow, Waylan, too. I'll definitely need to pay him another visit
10/12/23, 3:17 AM
Ooh great and very hot start for the story. Jayson hope to be versed; to fuck and to be fucked. Cant wait to read more from it.
10/11/23, 9:53 PM
Fuck what an amazing chapter, the gooning is so hot!
Ab3
10/11/23, 4:42 PM
Woww that's a nice start.. wishing Jayson getting fucked and begging for a gang bang to get his ass fucked by everyone
10/11/23, 12:37 AM
Ooh this is hot! How very interesting. I hope Jayson becomes a dominant top who loves eating and fucking ass. Hehe Yeah, this is cool! Very sexy.
10/10/23, 4:39 PM
Holy moly, what a great concept! I love how much of a peek this is into a fully developed fantasy, and how it seamlessly blends some fun kinks. Excellent start and I'm looking forward to more!
10/9/23, 5:22 PM
This is a great start. Can't wait.
Anonymous
10/9/23, 4:22 PM
Amazing!
10/9/23, 3:18 PM
I’m digging this new setting for the story; it’s got fun twists and I feel like it has even more fodder for hot dynamics. It’s great to see someone leaning into the casual sex world vibes—nobody cares that Travis stopped working to have sex! I dig it.
Anonymous
10/8/23, 6:23 PM
Should have left perfection alone. This is just awful.

10/8/23, 6:32 PM
@Anonymous Kisses <3<3<3

10/9/23, 2:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, now…Edlam took a risk making a story in someone else’s universe and provided me with my first bit of fan fiction ever, which is something I have wanted ever since I started writing. It might not be your cup of tea, but that doesn’t make it bad. *I* think he’s doing a fabulous job with the characters, even if he takes them in directions I, in my limited way, wouldn’t have thought of. And never forget that LBAH featured a Jolly Green Giant possessed by an angel exploding a can of beans all over the protagonist…the story is a lot of things, but *perfection* might be a bit optimistic. ;)
Martin
10/9/23, 8:46 AM
There was a bit of confusion about how you're naming your series. In the first chapter, you used "Kingdom of Ardenne" as the series title, as for the subsequent chapters you used "Becoming a Man" as the series title. That confused the system and our approval team. I've just fixed that: All your chapters are now in the series "Kingdom of Ardenne". Please use that series name for subsequent chapters. And thank you for publishing your stories on our sites!

10/9/23, 9:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I was confused by the Series/Chapter system and I definitely made it worse by totally rewriting chap 1. Thanks for taking charge and consolidating them!
10/8/23, 5:55 AM
Wow...two new posts from Edlam in the same day, I must be imagining this! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I loved the 'Choosing Tanner' ending too, and it only made sense and fitting for you to come up with a follow up to it! Looking forward to how you'll carry on this great series with your flare! Lol...but you also realized that you just opened yourself another tab to your growing list of pending stories...so much depravities, so little time! But I'll patiently wait for whatever you come up with next because I'm sure it'll always be some good stuff! :laughing::+1::+1::+1:

10/8/23, 7:40 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Honestly, I'm feeling the writing bug. I'm going to make sure to get a couple chapters done of Sinfulfillment tomorrow to get a good amount ready for the coming weeks, then work on my commissioned story a bit to get it to a good place, then I can focus more on this story, which I'm crazy excited about. To me, Love Begins at Home is a legit masterpiece of erotic gay hypno porn. I'm so eager to try to add to it and give it justice <3

10/8/23, 8:59 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) hi edlam. I love all your masterpieces. And if there will be more chapters on Joey, daddy and cockslut?

10/8/23, 6:33 PM
@[jerryhot](/user/show/10039519) Eventually, yeah...just a lot of things in the air right now lol

10/9/23, 6:21 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Great to hear that you're in the mood to write again! I'll have to get back to writing as well, I'm guilty of leaving my stories hanging as well. Sounds like you have quite a few new projects underway for your attention, but don't forget your older ones too! I'm still looking forward to the continuation of Retirement and Re-Educator. :wink:
10/8/23, 7:50 PM
Very hot first chapter, i love it!
10/8/23, 3:40 AM
So fucking hot! Love how evil and degrading it is!!
10/8/23, 12:05 AM
Two Edlam chapters in one day is a treat! I love this, the corruption of father and son is hot. Pete cumming into his son's briefs and Blake getting fucked in his briefs and cumming into them as a result is sexy af!
10/7/23, 11:36 PM
Oh, wow EdIam! I am both surprised and excited to see you're continuing this series! :heart: I must say that given how good you are at dealing with the darker side of stories (I'm still blissfully _traumatized_ by your developing of "I Think..." lol), this choice suits you very well. I'm confident you'll do great! I'm definitely on board for this terrific ride of incest and corruption :)
:3
10/7/23, 11:19 PM
this is HOTTTT
10/7/23, 10:02 PM
Very excited to see how this develops!

10/7/23, 10:09 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Appreciate you, friend <3 I'll try not to let you down
10/7/23, 9:41 PM
I'll also say, if this does well, there is a desire, and I continue with Neemie's blessing, I may do a similar continuation with the 'Choosing Blake' story branch <3
10/7/23, 9:38 PM
I just want to say this: Love Begins at Home was such an amazing story that latched onto my brain and is still in there. [S. Q. Neemie](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/767920) made such an elaborate, perverse, amazingly believable demonic story that moved at such a perfect pace, allowing all the characters to really experience their journey into depravity so brilliantly. When I approached him to compliment him on what has now become my favorite story, I began spit-balling ideas about how I'd continue the 'Choosing Tanner' ending...which, as a guy who likes the darker endings most of the time, was the one I gravitated to most. Luckily, he gave me his blessing. I plan on continuing this with a chapter devoted to each of the other four families taken in by Tanner as well as a conclusion with Pete/Blake. It won't just be full on depravity; I want to respect Neemie's amazing storytelling and ensure that there is conflict, possible redemption, and a satisfying conclusion that _may_ branch into two paths as his did. I'm writing this with his blessing, with his approval on publishing the chapters, and with a large amount of honor that he's trusting me with this. I hope you all like it!!!
10/5/23, 10:58 PM
This is really fun worldbuilding! From the surgery to the implant to the way life works before and after you reach adulthood, you’ve obviously put some thought into this. And casual sex worlds always make for hot scenarios; I loved Josue’s presence everywhere he showed up. And thanks for the shout-out. I’m proud to have been an inspiration to someone!
Martin
10/5/23, 7:06 PM
The links to your images are broken, it would be better to upload them to our site (the image dialog allows to upload images, too). Also, your story would read much easier if you'd add more paragraph breaks. Usually, a new paragraph is started each time another person starts to speak. But nevertheless, your story is really hot!
10/5/23, 3:01 AM
I wish we could get more Mariposa
10/4/23, 4:52 AM
I already adored this series but to see it receive the love of a re-edit to tighten the links to what happens in the future. To better introduce the reader to the characters and the world. Wonderful. Who knew I could enjoy it any more!? Love your work. I am excited to see the refinement of the story through the chapters as you go, as well as looking forward to new additions in the end to find out where Jasper and co end up.
10/2/23, 6:29 AM
Oh, DAMN. Just saw how old this chapter was. If money might motivate you to continue it, please get in touch.

10/2/23, 4:45 PM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) Welllllll.... The story has developed pretty well and currently the plan is to write it as a short (?) novel and self publish it on Amazon. I did that previously with [The Reindeer Clause](https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B09NK51FWV/) after it was extremely well received on here and people kept asking me for a copy they could buy and read every Christmas. Wish and Reindeer are in the same universe and the protagonists are referred to in each other's stories. Currently I'm working on a science fiction series that I think is going to be less commercial and when it's done the plan is to go back to the fantasy material that I think could be published. Thanks for reading and enjoying!

10/3/23, 1:25 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Great! 🤩💯❤️ I'm so happy to hear that you'll be continuing this story! Can't wait to see where it goes. Or course I'll buy a copy (assuming it's an ebook; I don't buy hard copies of anything anymore). Now I just need to figure out how to get notified when you publish it.

10/3/23, 1:29 AM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) It'll probably be a while, but I'll try and promote it here and elsewhere when that happens.
10/2/23, 6:28 AM
What an extraordinary story! You're hitting so many of my buttons, sexual and otherwise. And writing with intelligence, compassion, and deviousness. I have no idea what you have in mind for Rada, but the possibilities I can imagine are exciting. I expect you'll have some equally fascinating takes on how the relationship between Finn and Jack (ha! almost typed Finn and Jake. Math!) plays out, and I find that I care a lot about their happiness. That sex scene in the first chapter was first rate, too. Thank you! Please, please continue this!
Jul 6, 2022
9/22/23, 2:46 PM
Very very hot story, a great debut! Looking forward to reading future chapters

9/29/23, 11:02 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Appreciate it man, thanks a lot.