Recent Comments

11/4/23, 11:50 AM
Oh wow, a very sweet and romantic story.
11/4/23, 7:02 AM
AMAZING!! 😍😍🤩🤩😛😛😛😛
11/4/23, 5:30 AM
Amazing story. Hope it has a follow up
Oct 31, 2023
Martin
11/3/23, 9:21 PM
So beautiful... That scene reminded me of one of the most intense and most beautiful scenes in the VN "Straight?!". Do you know it?
Curious
11/3/23, 9:04 AM
Came for the smut - stayed for the worldbuilding. This is some next-level sci-fi thriller that I didn't know I needed. Can't wait for the next chapter!

11/3/23, 6:49 PM
@Curious Thank you so much. That's a great way of describing it now that you've pulled out that freezing. Queer Sci-Fi thriller. Yeah I like that.
11/3/23, 6:37 PM
And now for raving fanboi-ing: Jesus Christ, I loved this. I've loved all of it from the start. But twisting this so that Sean is hoisted on his own petard, in a way that may ultimately be beneficial to him, with a teaser of a Big Bad elseworld, well. This is erotica in an epic sci-fi story and it's exactly what I've always wanted without quite knowing it. God. I love it so much.
11/3/23, 1:31 PM
Very cute story!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 9:05 PM
Goodness! You get corporate himbo down to a “T”! I’ll be selfish and hope we get to see a self aware muscle freak in a future installment (e.g. someone who’s disgusted yet turned on by the changes they signed up for)

11/2/23, 9:08 PM
@Anonymous Oh... You will probably like Remanufactured. I personally feel that my entire niche is a more realistic take on the typically extreme fantasies that you see on this site. But I think you're going to enjoy what that story does.

Anonymous
11/2/23, 9:20 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Oh! Your realistic take is very much noticed. The previous chapter is layered in it in a way that left me on the edge of my seat. That paired with what a real sales pitch would look like in the first chapter. Really great stuff! Guess I’m just a sucker for “be careful what you wish for” tales

11/2/23, 9:52 PM
@Anonymous Oh that's an awesome comment about the previous chapter. Honestly that would have been a great comment to leave me because I really wasn't sure what people thought of that part. I kind of assumed it was just too weird for everybody. It only got about 1/3 of the ratings of the previous chapter. Anyway I agree with you about the careful what you wish for trope! In this particular case, I see the cost of Patrick's wish kind of being canceled out because Sean tried to take more power than he was given. The whole thing rebounds, and Patrick ends up getting off without paying a heavy price for his wish, but instead Sean pays the price for his wish. Well for both of their wishes really.

Anonymous
11/2/23, 10:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yup, it’s so hard to gauge people’s reactions. Just know you’ve made at least one reader very happy with your work 🙂. 2nd Chapter was probably pretty dense for most. You do you, but I feel like 4K words per chapter is the sweet spot. Not to mean you should shorten your work, but maybe release it in smaller chucks. For me, I (pleasantly) drowned in Patrick’s mindpalace. The contrast of the peaceful mind as he slowly becomes a monster? So good
11/2/23, 10:01 PM
Wow. This is so much better than I ever expected. Just brilliant. Worth the wait.

11/2/23, 10:02 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 🥰😍🥳
11/2/23, 4:56 PM
I want more! Thank you:)

11/2/23, 5:30 PM
@[hexleyosx](/user/show/910583) I'm glad you liked it! It was such a long segment I really wanted to split it into two but I kind of promised everybody that sex would happen in part three so you get something huge, just like Sean's dick.