Recent Comments

11/21/23, 11:05 AM
I really enjoyed the series of dates that were all a test. Creativity levels off the charts, the world is so vivid and detailed. And the plot thickens! I have to read this story slowly, I don't want to catch up and have to wait! A himbo, but smart! A brave new world indeed :laughing:

11/22/23, 12:14 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thanks. I thought that the test format was kind of fun. I actually wanted to more obviously format the decisions like they were inputs but I thought creating text boxes or something like that would be a little bit overkill.
11/17/23, 12:19 AM
Still thinking about this story. Are we to understand that Daniel's transformation was permanent? And if so....are you inspired to make a sequel? :)

11/20/23, 10:37 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) We ARE to think that! And there may be something in your stocking in the near future, but new projects are grabbing my attention right now.
11/20/23, 12:42 PM
Oh, one of the best stories in the site got updated - love ittttt~~ This is so good I'm probably sure this series might birth fanfics In any case, thank you for posting and keep writing!

11/20/23, 8:54 PM
@[Curious53](/user/show/983604) Wow I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. I did think that the fun factor was quite high.
11/20/23, 6:39 PM
Just as a warning, Kenny ([my mental picture here](https://imgur.com/a/VNcKfLc)) is pretty incidental to the remainder of Jayson's story. Kenny might get his own spin-off chapter at some point, but if you are expecting to read about the seduction of a cute redhead next chapter, you will be disappointed. There are other people for Jayson to seduce instead.
11/19/23, 10:30 PM
I want my next field trip to be to the HIMBO factory!

11/19/23, 11:38 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Sounds like a good idea to me too!
Nov 11, 2023
Anonymous
11/19/23, 7:55 PM
Just a comment to let the author know I loved this story. It's really good. Thank you for writing and sharing it. The characters, themes, plot and the concept of how everything works are all great. I hope a lot more gets written into that notebook!
11/14/23, 5:07 AM
Totally hot! Keep going this way and it will have a permanent place in my fantasies!

11/19/23, 7:27 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) Aye aye Sir !!
Anonymous
11/19/23, 3:19 PM
Love the dynamic of this couple.

11/19/23, 3:48 PM
@Anonymous Thanks a lot!
Flamefox23
11/19/23, 7:01 AM
Hot, can't wait to see how this turns out.

11/19/23, 3:48 PM
@Flamefox23 Glad you're enjoying!
11/19/23, 7:47 AM
Please Sir, i want some more.

11/19/23, 12:11 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Your comments mean the world to me! Thank you!
11/19/23, 5:48 AM
This is like the Island of Unwanted Toys from Rudolf the Red-Nosed Reindeer!

11/19/23, 5:51 AM
@[gayeplfan](/user/show/909079) Ahahahahahahahaha. It's even more like that in the next part. But the underlying inspiration was actually all of that AI art that came out earlier in the spring where it looks good for a second but then you realize that there were serious anatomical errors that your brain was just trying to ignore.
11/17/23, 10:16 PM
Great fucking story. I hope it continues. So many new adventures await this budding cumdump.

11/19/23, 3:35 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thank you so much! I can't wait to share all the adventures he's going to get into >:)
11/18/23, 12:15 AM
Goddamn you can fucking write I'm hard as fuck and ready for the next chapter(s). Well done you definitely have a knack for writing gay mind control erotica, that sir is a motherfuckin fact
11/17/23, 5:28 PM
Wow how deliciously unexpected, you caught me off guard with that plot twist I cannot wait to see where this is going to lead. Well done sir you have me hook, line, and sinker....
Anonymous
11/17/23, 3:36 PM
Man I hope Liam struggles and resists
11/17/23, 8:32 AM
Oh wow thats a hot chapter. Cant wait to read how will he convert Xavier. I wonder what will be next after his entourage.
11/17/23, 4:49 AM
Oh fuck yeah! This was so hot and sexy! Love the pov. Love the actions. Sooo good. I hope he wins and gets his three slutty subby needy butt play loving good boys.
11/16/23, 12:39 AM
You're style is so sexually descriptive that I can imagine EVERYTHING so perfectly. the push and pull of teasing and edging in the story is just like real life. Love anything to do with cum inflation and living condom fleshlight stuff. Thank you for your amazing talent!
Nov 11, 2023
Anonymous
11/16/23, 12:07 AM
I love premises like this and I loved the description of mixed feelings after realising he wasn't gay before. Great story!
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 2:12 AM
Insanely hot. Just one question: are they really father & son? I wasn’t sure from the way it started.

11/15/23, 4:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) They begin as step-dad/step-son, but as the bond grows, they become father and son.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 1:49 AM
This is great. I love the progression and writing style. Hopeful for another chapter.

11/15/23, 4:14 PM
@[JVill](/user/show/10030603) Thanks for the vote of confidence! I think I know exactly where I want to take this. It involves his son's friend.
Oct 29, 2023
EntrancedGay92
11/5/23, 7:36 PM
Beautiful and intimate, a perfect father/son relationship.

11/15/23, 4:13 PM
@[EntrancedGay92](/user/show/171924) Thank you! The style is kind of a departure for me, but I really enjoyed writing it.
11/15/23, 12:02 AM
For anyone interested, I did generate some AI images of the cast. I typically tend to leave more minimalist descriptions, so you can imagine them however you want, but if you want to see what is in my head, see the links below: [Jayson, Sam, Dr Altman, Randy](https://imgur.com/a/PC79I6u) [Liam, Romeo, Xavier, Des](https://imgur.com/a/kmr2cVe)
11/13/23, 7:04 PM
This was super hot! I am a bit sad that Hendrick didnt get gangbanged though lol. Imagine if all the partygoers burst in right as they finished fucking each other and then having their way with the brothers for the rest of the night, would be insanely hot.

11/14/23, 3:30 AM
@[Somerandomscreenname](/user/show/10010302) I like the way you think! :wink:
time-to-occur
11/14/23, 1:12 AM
I really enjoyed the deep dive into the lore of Fractured and the manufacturing of HIMBOs. I'm super curious to see what happens next. So far it's been almost wholesome, but these two definitely aren't where they're supposed to be!

11/14/23, 1:30 AM
@time-to-occur Exactly!
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
11/13/23, 3:55 PM
Great descriptions!
11/13/23, 1:57 PM
This story is so well written. I enjoy the build-up. I love the cum. THANK YOU for your excellent writing.