Recent Comments

1/20/24, 4:55 AM
Didn't expect to see the next leg of the story so soon, but enjoyed seeing the relationship between Jake and Simon grow further. Like @Fred W. Kong said, the balance between the erotic and romantic parts of this story is really enjoyable and makes the whole story enjoyable. I am really looking forward to seeing how the Neurolink will change the dynamic between Jake and SImon as well as how Jake's friends will be brought into the mix. This sotry has me thinking about the D/s relationship and how the emotional side of the master/slave realtionship can interact.
1/19/24, 10:48 PM
You could have saved this concept and sold it to an erotica publisher. Like, conventional publishing. They do plenty of mc. (I mean this as possibly one of the greatest compliments I can give) You do an incredible job of balancing the erotic and romantic elements of this story. Even when sex isn't happening, I'm enjoying the characters and how they move around each other. Listening to Jake's internal monologue really adds a ton to the sex scenes, and his introduction to D/s and kink play feels very, very realistic. This story is already one of the greats, Simon and Jake are going to be living in my head for a long time coming.
1/19/24, 5:53 PM
Very very hot, sexy, just great. Lovely plot and set up and romance and porn. Very good story. The tech reveal was nifty. Loved that.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 11:50 PM
It would be nice to see the archive and the stats and upgrades for his pets. There were some pretty interesting upgrade. Which could have great combinations.
StormRaven1217
1/10/24, 11:36 AM
Yey, more of Bull!!! Can't wait for the next part - he might have been forgiven but he can't get of the hook so easily.

1/18/24, 11:17 PM
@StormRaven1217 Thanks - Part Two is now up! And you're totally right - forgiven, but definitely not off the cock.
1/18/24, 1:55 PM
This series is now one of my all time favorites. Well done!
Anonymous
1/18/24, 1:30 AM
So I'm confused. Did Jake get "neurobridged"?

1/18/24, 1:33 PM
@Anonymous No, he didn't. He went on an date with Simon; Simon had Jake submit to him in the park; they went back to Simon's place together.
1/18/24, 9:02 AM
Absolutely loving this!! Can't wait to read more.
1/18/24, 1:40 AM
I love a good fantasy story with mind control… and an ongoing serial…. Swoon!