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Anonymous
2/25/17, 2:54 AM
This story was fantastic and I'm glad it focused more on relationships and happiness than sex and revenge.
Anonymous
2/25/17, 2:53 AM
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2/25/17, 1:33 AM
Thanks, LongtimeFan! Wasn't trying to be overly humble, just acknowledging that this one in particular seems to be hitting some real emotional buttons. Heck, I choked up WRITING chapter seven, so I'm glad it had a similar impact when people read it.
LongtimeFan
2/24/17, 11:51 PM
Don't sell yourself short! Your early stuff is equally great; I really like the X-Dream Makeover and Six Pack series. I especially love your skill in world-building: the moment when the women of the Six Pack stories complained about Mariposa made me laugh out loud, but also brought up how dang HARD it would be to hide something like that from the world. I think that all of the writers on this site do things differently, and it works: sometimes I come here for physical pleasure, other times mental. Keep it up! :)
Anonymous
2/24/17, 11:50 PM
Thanks Nicely done.
2/24/17, 11:26 PM
^ You can read my previous stories for this site here: https://gayspiralstories.com/newAuthor/show/2256 My collaboration with Aardvark is listed separately here: https://gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2343 I'm delighted to see that "21-Year-Old Scotch" seems to be striking such an emotional chord, so my apologies in advance if earlier stories aren't up to its level.
Anonymous
2/24/17, 11:03 PM
WOW!!!! What a GREAT story. I would love to see more of your writing. I cried too over Chapter 7.
dougkent60
2/24/17, 8:52 PM
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You, Thank You, Thank You, Thank You.
Anonymous
2/24/17, 8:49 PM
Nice work.
Blind_Seer
2/24/17, 8:04 PM
This story was amazing, and i will definitely reread it half a dozen times in the future. The last three chapters were particularly well done, with Scott talking to his mother, Todd being an amazing person and ally, and the whole relationship between Scotty and Jared was teally sweet. It was great to see my prediction about Amanda and Pat come true. It was interesting how you made it so everyone had ups and downs in their life. I'm sad that Phil died since it was so senseless, but so goes, life i guess. All in all, a great read and story, with a great payoff of sexy gay Kraven. Keep up the good work.